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MG ff not that kind of love story part 11 pg 27 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago

when u r planning to update it

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Posted: 12 years ago
Pls,if u like this and want to continue press the like button and post comments! Tnx
Here is part 6


Part 6

Oh my,oh my,oh my...!!MMMy grandson...aaaccident...OT...wife!?!
That nurse must be mentaly disturbed,i better go to hospital now!!

Thank you,dear babaji for saving him!!


All this time waiting outside the operation theater made me think again about significence of life and lil things that can bring u a change in its normal flow...is it important that u study hard and be mannered,a good man/woman,belive in god when in as flash of litethis things just easly can b taken away?!I was still in my thoughts,walking into his room...

It was green and flowers all over the field...i was feeling so light,so good...no more pain...like flying...she appeared...dressed in white salwar...blushing hard...walked towards me...my angel...


Dont know how i found myself nearing his bed...rubbing the tears away from my cheecks...they turned red...
I was there,he looked so...peacefull...those big eyelashes,pointed chin...M shaped lips...beautiful...

Why did she stopped...i raised my hand to touch her delicate one...it felt so real,the feeling is overwelming...
He took my wrist in his fist...what was that sensation...my pulse is rising...his too...She can feel it too...i tryed to open my eyes to see her face...wow,this light...its all blurry...blink again...i see...angelic face...He is looking at me and i at him for the past 5 minutes...Then he spoke...
I want to know the one who saved my life and my soul,whats your name angel?!


GEET...said dadi standing at the door!


Precap:
I am taking u home
Edited by Myra.nelly - 12 years ago
vrsharma thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part.
 
but i think it is part 6 not 7 :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
does dadi know geet b4?
pl cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: vrsharma

Nice part.


but i think it is part 6 not 7 :-)

My bad,ignore that!
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: preethia

<font color="#9900cc" size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">loved the update...</font>

<font color="#9900cc" size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">does dadi know geet b4?</font>
<font color="#9900cc" size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">pl cont soon</font>

no dear,she doesnt,u will see next part,tnx 4 comment
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice ff.. loved it a lot👏
but its sooo short naa...??? plz make it lil big...
n plz send me a pm whenever u update next😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊 Tnx
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: disha_maan

nice ff.. loved it a lot👏
but its sooo short naa...??? plz make it lil big...
n plz send me a pm whenever u update next😛

Tnx,i will pm u!
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ... continue soon ...

bit longer updates .. plzzz