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Hello every body!
This is my first attempt of writting a story,here it goes:
M:I didnt mean that...i...i am sorry!
G:U what?!!
M:i was in the temple just praying 4 my dadi and u apeared out of blue!
G:oh GOD! what will i do now?! Hey...mister u appologize imediatly,u destroyed my pooja taali !
M:i just did that miss!look,let me help u!(he bent down to take the pooja items to put it back on the taali,the sindoor was sprea all over the floor and he put It in the box with his fingers)
Here take it!"mean time geet also wanted to lift the taali when maan put the last part of red powder it to the box.
while lifting his fingers to the box he touched smth silky...geet bend her head to look down at the taali when she fel t smth soft toch her Maang...
Forgive the mistakes and pls tell if i should continue!
Characters sketch:
GEET-fun,loving girl,traditionalist(21 years),raised and educated by sisters in orphanage.Friends:sister Mary,classmate Prya.Currently does her MBA in Chicago.Personal goals:become a bussines woman and make a family of her own.
MAAN:powerfull young man(25 years old),owns KC,lives with his dadi ,parents died in car accident(thats why never drives a car).Friends:Adi,his manager at kc.Goals:make his only family left happy(dadi),witness a miracle.
Please tell me if some one likes it and wants me to continue!
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Index
part1-pg.2</font><font size="3">
Part2-pg4</font>
Part 3 pg6
Part 4 pg 8
Part 5 pg 11
Part 6 pg 14
Part 7 pg 17
Part 8 pg 20
Part 9 pg 22
Part 10 pg 25
Part 11 page 27
This is my first attempt of writting a story,here it goes:
M:I didnt mean that...i...i am sorry!
G:U what?!!
M:i was in the temple just praying 4 my dadi and u apeared out of blue!
G:oh GOD! what will i do now?! Hey...mister u appologize imediatly,u destroyed my pooja taali !
M:i just did that miss!look,let me help u!(he bent down to take the pooja items to put it back on the taali,the sindoor was sprea all over the floor and he put It in the box with his fingers)
Here take it!"mean time geet also wanted to lift the taali when maan put the last part of red powder it to the box.
while lifting his fingers to the box he touched smth silky...geet bend her head to look down at the taali when she fel t smth soft toch her Maang...
Forgive the mistakes and pls tell if i should continue!
Characters sketch:
GEET-fun,loving girl,traditionalist(21 years),raised and educated by sisters in orphanage.Friends:sister Mary,classmate Prya.Currently does her MBA in Chicago.Personal goals:become a bussines woman and make a family of her own.
MAAN:powerfull young man(25 years old),owns KC,lives with his dadi ,parents died in car accident(thats why never drives a car).Friends:Adi,his manager at kc.Goals:make his only family left happy(dadi),witness a miracle.
Please tell me if some one likes it and wants me to continue!
<font size="3">
Index
part1-pg.2</font><font size="3">
Part2-pg4</font>
Part 3 pg6
Part 4 pg 8
Part 5 pg 11
Part 6 pg 14
Part 7 pg 17
Part 8 pg 20
Part 9 pg 22
Part 10 pg 25
Part 11 page 27
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