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MG ff not that kind of love story part 11 pg 27

Myra.nelly IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Hello every body!
This is my first attempt of writting a story,here it goes:

M:I didnt mean that...i...i am sorry!

G:U what?!!


M:i was in the temple just praying 4 my dadi and u apeared out of blue!

G:oh GOD! what will i do now?! Hey...mister u appologize imediatly,u destroyed my pooja taali !

M:i just did that miss!look,let me help u!(he bent down to take the pooja items to put it back on the taali,the sindoor was sprea all over the floor and he put
It in the box with his fingers)
Here take it!"mean time geet also wanted to lift the taali when maan put the last part of red powder it to the box.
while lifting his fingers to the box he touched smth silky...geet bend her head to look down at the taali when she fel t smth soft toch her
Maang...

Forgive the mistakes and pls tell if i should continue!

Characters sketch:

GEET-fun,loving girl,traditionalist(21 years),raised and educated by sisters in orphanage.Friends:sister Mary,classmate Prya.Currently does her MBA in Chicago.Personal goals:become a bussines woman and make a family of her own.



MAAN:powerfull young man(25 years old),owns KC,lives with his dadi ,parents died in car accident(thats why never drives a car).Friends:Adi,his manager at kc.Goals:make his only family left happy(dadi),witness a miracle.

Please tell me if some one likes it and wants me to continue!
<font size="3">
Index
part1-pg.2</font><font size="3">
Part2-pg4</font>
Part 3 pg6
Part 4 pg 8

Part 5 pg 11

Part 6 pg 14
Part 7 pg 17

Part 8 pg 20

Part 9 pg 22

Part 10 pg 25

Part 11 page 27


Edited by Myra.nelly - 20 August 2011 at 12:05pm

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:14am | IP Logged
intresting conti soon...

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:40am | IP Logged

Ooohhh

I soo want to read more!!!

Please update soon and add me to pm list

:-)

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:33pm | IP Logged
wow..nice
love it.
do contiue plz.
thx

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Posted: 28 May 2011 at 9:36pm | IP Logged
Nice concept
Plz continue soon
Plz ad me to ur pm list

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Nice start...do continue
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 1:38am | IP Logged

Thank you all who liked my work!
1th part will come on 2nd june!

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:40pm | IP Logged
interesting concept...
pl cont soon and pl add me in ur pm list...
thanks

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