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The Cradle

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:40am | IP Logged
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Sanam, 

No, the poem does not necessarily rhyme every time. When I write poems, I tend to be alien-deep, sometimes some people or hardly I, myself am able to really understand what on Earth I have written. This can be a set-down sometimes, often considered a quality. 

'The Cradle' is perfectly understandable but has the same profound touch I am talking bout which lyrical pieces need to keep up with. I do not understand grammar much so I won't put that up, I really like your poem and the use of words up there.

The speaker considers the children in the cradle as enviable, life and people they yearn for have been unjust to em and this you've put up in a majestic manner, rich one, indeed. 

Thanks for the PM. Approve

Kankshita


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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
amazing poem dear 
loved it 
i guess i understood what you were trying to potray
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
hey Sanu :)
To me the poem seemed lovely! I'm no kind of judge as my poetry skills range from 0 to 2 in a scale of 100. So, that I cant be. However as a reader I got the feelings behind those words, thats what counts right :) so there! :)
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
ya i liked it...
 
i did kind of understand what u tried to write...
it was good...
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:54am | IP Logged
awesome, beautiful poem.
loved it.
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wowww superb hon HugHugloved it and thanks for pm 
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