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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 98)

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 10:05am | IP Logged
geet stayed :)  but she needs to give dev a slap and say ilu to maan!

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
oh no you are ending Ehtesaab too CryCry

are you going to write an epilogue and will Geet ever confess her love to Maan hmmm

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
Hi Muskan...what an update, full of emotion, sadness n intensity! Maan was angry with himself. Glad he trusted Geet n did not blame her for anything! Seems like Geet is establishing herself. Hoope she realises her love for Maan. He loves her alot. Please update soon. Is this FFending? Please pm wen u update...I know u have a lot of people to pm but u r a talented writer so do pm me as I love to read ur FF/SS. Will wait for the pm Smile

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
muah muah muah...tons tons of hugs!
u r awesome. how well u express maan's feelings...and geets too...
loved it lovedit...
r u sure u ended this... i know it was SS... super duper liked this update...
 
par musky honestly mujhe last paragraphs samajh nahein aaya... could u explain it plzzz!

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Edited:
  Fabulous update baji Hug... Me running out of adjectives to describe your ff LOL

Awww Geet was waiting for Maan's one word so that she doesn't have to leave him like this Disapprove
When Maan said "matjavoo" I had a lump in my throat Maan couldn't let the love of his life leave him like that, and I felt like Cry and she stopped and just as she says, she came face-to-face with all the pain in Maan... 

And when he apologized Geet realised why he was angry, he wasn't angry at her but he was blaming himself for what happened, and she also realised his blind trust on her, he didn't even care about the fact that she with Dev because Maan trusts her like anything... Embarrassed
Maan mentioned the word "love" for the first time and said that it is his love that emotionally bonds him to her, and this statement made Geet realise just how strong Maan loves her... Embarrassed

Geet also didn't back away, she brought him closer...

This time when they made love it was different a new beginning to their never ending darkness, as start of a new beginning, and it was purely out of love their love, and they were enveloped together to start this new beginning together...  Embarrassed
Awww Maan actually said "I LOVE YOU" to her, but he didn't wait for her or want her to day it because he knows how she feels without the need of her voicing it... 

He also lets her carry on her education where she missed off, she managed to start off a new business, and gain a good position in the market, this was only possible because Maan was by her side he has supported her and let her get into her, what ever she missed of life she was able to do... And even though she turned into a tough businesswoman she is still the same with her husband Embarrassed 

Oh no Ehtesaab ends Cry So soon... Nahin...!!! 



xx


Edited by humz_786 - 31 May 2011 at 1:06pm

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
wo so good... u made us cry. but ending no pleaseee...

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
excellent
continue soon

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
great part...

like the way they love each other...and feeling pain of each other that they always blame themselves no matter what happens...

waiting for next part...

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