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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 87)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged waitinggg...Tongue

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:15am | IP Logged
Waiting .. Embarrassed

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waiting DEAR!!!!!!!

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muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
 she didn't want to give him pain any more... she wanted to relief him of all the misery. She carried her suitcase & walked pass him.. he stood numb!!!
she painfully walked across.. his heart ached to hold her back.. her heart pounded for his one call.. his guilt ..his anger on self didn't let him form those letters into words .. aching ' his in to his love.. matjavoo
her foot step froze hearing the pain in that one much of pain.. all the pain was poured into it... the pain she caused.. she always knew she did.. today she came in face with it!!in real.. it was impossible to bear than she expected it to be.
I am sorry..I shouldn't have left u alone their.. I am really sorry he fell on his knees.. holding her hand that hung next to her sides... kissed them.. her hands felt drenched in his tears drenching her heart.. I am sorry.. I couldn't take care of our baby.
she looked at him in shock.. all this while he was angry..on self for leaving her alone..not at her!! he trusted her..he didn't even once question her, wat the hell was his wife doing with some one else!!
mujhe chod ke mat javoo.. main tumhare bina jee nahi sakta..he inched closer on his knees.
She immediately sat on her knees & hugged him.
Main jaan tha was pain in love that forced me to seduce you, take you into my world, mold and console you...but trust me it is love that emotional bond that holds me to you.
She looked at him in awe... she knew it he loves her..  but even now.. to this extend..her heart felt heavy hearing those words. She couldn't stop herself falling for this unconditional love.
I don't want pain to be the way you walked out of my life.
She shook her head & pulled him closer.. gesture promising enough to never leave.
They lifelessly hung on to each other.. consoling the wounded souls... soon his hug turned their envelope into a intense moment & they lost themselves..& they did! they made love like never before. His touched every bit of her ..claiming her.. his tears drenched her soul was soaked in his love.

he slid into her inner recesses and branded her yet again for life. He came in slow, savoring every moment when they were finally joined as one in the most primal of ways, he touched her very core lovingly

And when they couldn't bear the pleasure and the pain any longer, he took her on a wild ride. They rode the wave of exquisite pain filled pleasure, drove and rode it till, at last, they found release in each other. All they could remember now was each other.. their being complete together.. the grief of their loss.. the pain of their pain love lost..tears followed.. as they kissed each others tears away... hugging crying cuddling.. nuzzling rolling over each other in love ..not in pain...soothing each other.

Next morning..
he kissed her forehead.. I love u he whispered new beginning of a new life.. like a sunshine after the never ending darkness..
she looked at him.. & she hesitated .. she wanted to say something..
he kissed her lips.. I know u need some time.
Her hands slipped around his bare torso sealing their n***d body together.

4 months had passed Geet had started her own IT company with her own funds from her sponsors. No one in the family questioned her following maan's firm statement the other day. Maan had given the space she required to work on her company. She was working madly like a machine. She spend more than 16-18hrs  a day building her business. He knew there was something that was driving her ' something that was unknown.. but he knew she needed that.. needed that to gain all that she has lost ..& thats the only way he could be hers.

Finding self.. finding those lost years of hers in love & trust was more than anything else to her. ...accountability!!! estesaab!!!

her IT firm did very well & she was giving tuff competition to the mid size IT firms with her quality of work. Maan could see a killing instinct in her. A burning of self..with every sucesss..she was getting rude..cunning .. hard core business person.. though nothing between them had changed.. he just silently stood by her.. like always.. but this time he was dam sure nothing will go out of control, he will not let anything go beyound them..

-BLOG ehtesaab part 24-

Ehtsaab Ends

Thanxs for all the beautiful comments
it really motivated me & helps me to write more

Edited by muskanp - 05 June 2011 at 4:17pm

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:22am | IP Logged

first..let me enjoy..DancingDancing...i am first...i am first...PartyParty..i know i know..i am being all...Silly...but i am so happy...Big smile

now...awesome part...lovely...ClapClapClap

when maan said matjavo..i was like...CryCry..he was in so much pain...the love os his life leaving way...

n then he said geet understood what was in him that was making him angry...he was angry coz he was blaming himself...Ouch

when he said...but trust me it is love that emotional bond that holds me to can any1 not believe him..he was saying it frm his heart...for the first time i think geet realized the depth of his feeling...

geet also promised him by her action that she will never leave all...Embarrassed..n Cry..tears of joy this time...LOL

they made love in pain, the sorrow, the tears, all of it just cocooned felt like souls meeting never to part again...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

she still didnt say anything the next morning...but i dont think she needs to say anything to him...he has always understood her...without her being vocal abt it...

he realized that she has to find her own she has to accomplish something...her zeal is driving her towards that goal...n i believe she is close to achieve it...

he has n will always stand by matter what...coz she is too precious to lose...

i wonder if the family's behaviour has changed towards her???

what...what...what...ShockedShockedShocked...ehtesaab ends ...CryCry...aisa na karo na...Cry...

deewangi...ended...TM...abt to end...Ehtessab..will end in next part...Cry...plz tell me u r working on a new story..plz...

cant wait for the next part...update soon...n once first...Tongue

Edited by jyoti_l - 30 May 2011 at 11:47am

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged

awesome part

im all in tearsCry

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craziekudi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:28am | IP Logged
that was a mindblowing confession!!!
it ends... dont muskaan!! why are u doing this!!

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pinku33 Senior Member

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 11:30am | IP Logged
Awesome part...

But are u ending it???????????Disapprove  or does that precap has other meaning??

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