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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 80)

fairyland_1234 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Muskan di,please don't  seperate themCry.please...let maan stop her again.

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paponecon IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 6:21pm | IP Logged
mujhe laga jab maan geet ko apne room me le aye un dono khulke bat kadega but ye geet ye behave kyun kya...ekbar to maan ko gale laga lete...sirf bacche k liye...maan ne us bakt se uska sath hain jab bacche nehi aye...tav v uski khamoshi me geet k liye pyar hota tha...i hope maan geet ko rok le...aur unke pyar k izhar ho dev k samne...

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MsMovielover IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 6:37pm | IP Logged
nooo i dont want her to leave Cry
poor maan he is just too great...
rs12345 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
Muskan pls dont separate them 
Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 7:23pm | IP Logged
NO. . . . Plz no . . . . I hate dev i seriously do. .
I wish maan stopped her but i know he won't. . . . He never did. . . .
Nd she loves him i think dis sepreation make her realize dat.
mandymore IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
sad prt.both r thinkng abt eachothr n unknwingly hurting eachothr more.pata nahi maaneet ki muskile kb khatm hongi.uggh...hate dev.
mystique_girl Goldie

Joined: 07 February 2011
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
hi muskaan,
commenting on ehtesaab after a long time...

from beginning till now, the story has been wonderfully written and the characters have really evolved well...we have seen and understood Dev, Geet and Maan through situations you have put them through. Love it how Maan unconditionally showered his love on Geet, feel angry to see the selfishness in Dev- he throws her away and badmouths her infront of everybody and again wants her back when he feels alone - never once caring for Geet's feelings,feel pained to see the suffering of Geet. Over the recent few updates I see Geet trying to stand up on her own and giving Maan the priority in life, though silently - she feels attraction,love and considers the baby in her as a boy - which would never happen if she hadnt felt his love or had no feelings towards him ..

Well the twist is really sad, they lost the line connecting them - i understand both are deeply pained but sometimes words need to be spoken out - we are not God that we understand feelings without being said all the time... felt sad for the family as well - they had expected so much..

Well, nice story, carry one... we are all with you in all the steps you takeBig smile

Will it be asking too much to request an update for Ehtesaab everyday ?Shocked

Edited by mystique_girl - 29 May 2011 at 7:54pm
PoojaMishty Goldie

Joined: 20 March 2011
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 8:27pm | IP Logged
OMG... Thats so sad..

Poor Maan... are yaar koi kisi se itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai...

Why can't geet understand his love, his care..
She knows he loves her.. Then why she is living him???? At least try to understand his pain.. 

So sad...Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry.Cry

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