-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 - Page 66

Posted: 12 years ago
awesoem update Muskan
loved it..
oh no itni jaldi Ehtesaab end kyao kar rahi hai...plz cont this for more parts
plz itni jaldi na end kare😭

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...bt plzzz don end this...!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it ...Beautiful part!!!
awesome!!!
Posted: 12 years ago
That was fab update
Loved it
They are one agn
Geet was getting herself back all the thgs she missed due to that Dev
I so hate him
But they are one n Maan confessed his love it was awesum
Posted: 12 years ago
matjavoo... part my heart went  for maan
they made love to sooth their pain
& sorrow cocooned one another
wow geet couldnt stop to fall in love
with maan with his  unconditional love
she almost reaching to achieve what
she lost to  that devil
as always maan stand by her quitely
wonder if maan family change their mind
toward geet
uff di ur ending soon
i hope ur coming up with another
amazing FF soon



Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
just his one word i knew she cant hold herself back with it...
finally he said it and its not pain but love now...
i think she is working hard to prove to those ppl who tried to belittle her saying she always had to b dependant on someone probably she shud strip of dev form his very own company...hisab barabar...but she loved him so i doubt if she wud do that...
pl cont soon...cant wait to c the end
Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful part.
loved it.
loved the way maan confessed his love, longing for geet.
 it's so touching beautiful
 me has tears in my eyes.

 it's touch geet's heart soul.
geet's want to know and have dilemma and sad about maan's silence after MC and think   that may be maan was angry on her but now she heard maan was angry on himself cause he couldn't stay with her that time.
 how heart touching confession from maan to geet.
finally they r together.
 yes maan is right
 geet need some time.
loved to see geet opened her own IT firm.
it's needed for her self confidence.
maan know his geet very well.
continue soon.


Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful awesome part.
She didnt go yay 👏
Maan stopped her .
Both of them absorbing each others pain while making love was beautiful.
Maan lead her out of the pain into love.
Geet getting independent with complete moral support from Maan was superb.
Maan made the family quiet too.He is the best .
I am sure Dev is going to get his share from Geet.
Ehtesaab is also ending 😭.
It was an amazing FFthough.
Will miss it.
Waiting for the next part.


Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome! 👏 it was beautiful.
wats dat precap😲 u r ending it 😭 r u really ending it 🤢 itna bada bomb giradiya hamare upar 😭 pls pls pls do some more part 😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update. M being emotional n thirlled by such a lovely n fab update! Its nt fair di u r ending most of ur ff. Plz dont end it ( makin baby face). Update soon

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