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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 46)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:03am | IP Logged

Nice

wht can i say beond tht

read all the part from yesterday and i liked this ff of urs 2 Clap

this is also awsome..u r briliant writter. Clap

wht i m still not able to accept is their first love making. it was so sudden i mean they never spock never share anything n still making love and after that also geet still loves dev, she still felt for him though she understand tht maan loves her. She want the baby but then why is so careless towords her health. how come dev now realise her imp in his life. i mean before their divorce also they were no together for 5-6 months but still tht time he able to manage everything but now he felt difficult to manage without her.

i pity for maan.. he is unconditional lover but some how i don't like his charecter here i mean u always portray him an angree dashing young man. but here something is missing. i mean somewere he is so helpless i don't know how to explain because i m not as gud as u in selecting words Cry

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
arghhh is dev ki toh main... jab sab theek chal raha hai... to ye kyn beech mein apni tang arha rha haiAngry... cant he jst leave them alone... he betrayed geet... n more of dat he disrespected her... how shamelessly he has cum again to take her back... stupid jerkCensored...
poor maanCry... i love this maan... kitna sweetu hai... bina kuchh kahe sab kuchh sahen kar rha hai... sirf geet k liyeCry... plzzz di dont make him suffer so much... but i guess perhaps this is how geet wud realize dat she loves maan nt dat devILAngry

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Why did that Dev had to cum back
Their life was gng ok
Mana she wasnt opening up but she was happy
Why the hell he spoiled evrythg

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
muski, great update...continue...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:29am | IP Logged
I am crying maan give her all love , respect , support and what she is giving him...i hate this she should run to maan ..why now dev no this cant happen why you want maan cry bec of dev no never muskaan kab tak royega maan...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged
superb awesomee maan plzzz apne haq ke liye ladoooSmile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 3:54am | IP Logged
touching... I am very moved after reading this part..maan is hurting himself now..and geet that beautiful soul is just getting deep into her walls... great part..well written..keep it up!!!

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