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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 33)

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
Thanks a lot dear for the PM and a mind blowing update...
I was waiting to read this update...
 
Maan's character in this FF is out of this world ...you have charaterized him so well that I have fallen for this MAAN...
I am speechless...he loves her so much that he cannot thing beyond her... he is possessive about her, he cares for her, she is his life...
its not that she is carrying his child its his true and selfless love for her that he can go to any extent to give happiness to her without hoping to get any thing in return ...
 
Bravo Muski for creating this Maan...
continue soon

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:21am | IP Logged
loved it a lot yaarBig smile

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:32am | IP Logged
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Originally posted by muskanp

Kyun mujhe se itna pyar karthen hain aap?
He was dumb stuck with her question.. question he himself didn't have an answer for
aakhir kab taak?
He cupped her face & kissed her forehead... jab taak yeh saans hain tab taak
aapki pyar ki koi seema kyun nahi? 
& hit his chest..
He chuckled..kisi ne mujh se kaha tha.. when did lines come between love
something I didn't know about then.. probably because I never felt it then, something I never experienced it then, now I know...
she was lost in those words.. when did lines come between love!!!!  this wat she told him them... 
Aap ko dard nahi hota,..she asked painfuly
hota hain bahut hota hain.. tumhare aanko main aanso dehk kar.. in aanko main udasi dehk kar.. mujhe bahot dard hota hain..
oh Maan iss dard ka main babaji ko kya javab doon gi
he pulled her closer in his embrace.. tumhe kisi ko javab deni ki zarorat nahi


finally they got married ...hope k ab woh dev phr nahi ajey apni prem katha ly kr Angry... 

u rocked againThumbs Up 
MUSKAN


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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 2:49am | IP Logged
they are married finally... awww loved it... maan is sooo cute... sooo sweet... he is being bad in the eye of his family jst 4 geet... n now his family cares 4 geet more than him... awwDay Dreaming
btw i hate dat jerk dev... achha hua pichha chhuta us devIL se... how cud he let anyone insult geet ... dat geet who always lived 4 him... thought 4 him... she even didnt hire any lawyer or didnt say anything abt dev's extra marital affair... n he...Angry...arggghhh 
achhi dhulai ki maan ne uskiSmile... i knw maan will bring his geet back in life 4 sureBig smile

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
congrats on the new thread
loved it
finally they r married

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 4:07am | IP Logged
awesome part

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Brilliant part.
 loved it.
geet become numb in pain,
geet's trust break by dev, geet's love humiliate by dev.
 too much love for dev, too much trust for dev but in return she only get  pain, humiliation and today is the last nail of the coffin .
today ever thing cross the limit.

Here maan is there for her in always to absorb her pain, reduce her pain.
 geet want to some peace and solace in maan's arms and hide herself in his arms.
and now this devAngry, shameless person, still he has the guts to come in front of geet to going neat to her.
maan done right thing to him.
maan should break his some bones.
maan will not protect geet more and never let that dev will come near to him

it's one month still geet is not in herself.
 now their wedding preparation start and the wedding day when priya come geet want to confesses or told about her past.
 but maan stop her and again proved his unconditional love for his geet.
geet also amazed to see it.
her respect for maan will defo increase.
 geet needs more time.
after wedding when dadi want to give her responsibility she politely refused and wants some time.
geet unknowingly and  unintentionally broke maan's dream but she is also in pain , like maan is also in pain.
 
loved this part. to beautiful , emotional,touching part.



Kyun mujhe se itna pyar karthen hain aap?
He was dumb stuck with her question.. question he himself didn't have an answer for
aakhir kab taak?
He cupped her face & kissed her forehead... jab taak yeh saans hain tab taak
aapki pyar ki koi seema kyun nahi?
& hit his chest..
He chuckled..kisi ne mujh se kaha tha.. when did lines come between love
something I didn't know about then.. probably because I never felt it then, something I never experienced it then, now I know...
she was lost in those words.. when did lines come between love!!!!  this wat she told him them...
Aap ko dard nahi hota,..she asked painfuly
hota hain bahut hota hain.. tumhare aanko main aanso dehk kar.. in aanko main udasi dehk kar.. mujhe bahot dard hota hain..
oh Maan iss dard ka main babaji ko kya javab doon gi
he pulled her closer in his embrace.. tumhe kisi ko javab deni ki zarorat nahi


loved it.
now geet need some more time to understand and forget about past it'll only happen by maan's love but it'll defo take lots of time.

continue soon.



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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
when people say that love is self less... I guess this what it means...

Maan is an epitome of a self less love... He so self lessly taking the blame on himself so that no one questions her... becuz only he knows what or who she is...and the pain she is going through...


Muskan I'm falling in love with this Maan...

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