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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 24)

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
Congratz ! Its a beautiful story :) I'm loving it !

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so sorry, bcs i did not comment, but saving my res now
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THANXS SWATI FOR BEAUITFUL POEM
 
Today I  am in mourning,

At the death of a relashionship'

At the death of an emotion'

At the death of my own being

 

You stabbed me repeatedly,

Still the love remained selflessly.

You brutally tortured your Geet,

Yet her love for you survived.

 

Dev's Geet loved him madly;

More than herself'.more than herfamily'

More than the world'

More than her own being!

 

Yet you had the power to kill her,

Insulting her, your heart didn't falter?

Blaming her, your conscience didn't prick you??

Paining her-oh! How could you??

 

She was always by your side,

With hope in her heart she took each stride'

Even today didn't you see her?

With your choice on her body'love in her eyes, she walked there!

 

But, you are a soul less murderer'

A cold-blooded person, a disloyal monster'

Yes, yoday you finally succeeded'

The love that was there, finally faded!!

 

When she was insulted didn't you notice??

she stood for herself, to that you pushed it'

She spoke, she slapped, yet didn't cry!

She left you there, silently walked by!!

 

The tears-why didn't they come?

Was it the love that was flowing all along?

Was she afraid the last will flow away?

Was it the remains of the love that she didn't let away?

 

No, it was disgust that you earned!!

Dirt like you isn't worthy of the tears that burned!

The tears are pure'they keep feelings secure'

But, your Geet was dead, the disease was cured!!

 

Who walked out was Geet Handa!

A respectful woman, a would-be mother'

A serene soul, a flower to be treasured,

She will be cherished by the man who loves her!

 

Love

Swati





Edited by muskanp - 22 May 2011 at 1:45pm

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thanks but my eyes are burning nd m feeling all sleepy hav nt taken any nap whole day becuz of books  ...Sleepy ...
will read tomorrow morning good night

 Hug hugs nd kisses Heart

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged

felt geets pain

i hope dev is punished bt geet is getting punished

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
Swati , beautiful brilliant poemClap

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Wow amazing poem
W8ing for update x

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