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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 13)

muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ajenn

I jst hate tat Dev to core.Wish geet had jst slapped Dev as well. He was the one betrayed Geet and now he is pointing on Geet's character. Their 8 yrs relationship was jst an illusion. It looks like Dev wasnt living in it. It was just Geet. Glad maan was waiting for Geet outside the court. Far away from her. Knowing somehow she might need him at the end. He understand her vry well. I hope Geet will value Maan's love and start to treasure it. Would really love to see them together.

I wish geet could slap him.. but @ this moment she couldn't she was too shaken
dev just lost everything becuase of his ego
maan..was such a darling.. he really cared.. though he didn't want to interfer.. but he was always there.. just for her.. like it was more of his need not hersEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
thanxs for the comment dear

muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by PoojaMishty

Nice update Muskan.Clap

Loved the Maaneet nok-jhok for Beta ya Beti... Smile

Poor Geet.. She is suffering so much...Cry

"A million words would not bring you back, I know because I tried, neither would a million tears, I know because I cried"

I hate Dev..Angry He is such a Censored..  How could he blame Geet like that...????? 

Geet... Baby... Wake up... Don't waste your pure love on that B******... 
I hope she will forget Dev.. I know its very difficult for her but i hope Maan's love will cure her pain...

loved the quote !!! wonderful
dev isAngryAngryAngry
geet really seemed to be under shock nowOuch
thanxs dear

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muskanp IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by t_areeb

beautifully concieved and written
wish he could convince, that it is not a fake marriage at all
love her dialogues regarding ehtesab in court room, happy that she saw his true face, and may be come out of his trance,
thanxs a lot
glad u liked it
court room part tried to keep to simple & real...
fake marriage..ConfusedConfusedConfused lets seeEmbarrassed..
how long they call it fakeShocked
paponecon IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:27am | IP Logged
In whole part geet' behaviour thought were only irritating me a lot...Unhappy

I know she loved him a lot...8 years relations says many things... wo avv dev se bohut kuch expect kar raha hain aur wo uski perspective se jayez v hain...lekin maan...uska kya...geet usko sirf apni pain dur kadneka ek way samajh lia...wo maan k sath bed share kar raha hain baby k bare main bat kad raha hain aur dev k favourite color ki dress pad raha hain dev se avv v umeed kad raha hain...thats not fair...very wrong...very very wrong...ek relation se puri tarase azad nehi hota to wo insaan kavv dusri relation main apni 100% nehi de sakta...aur happy v nehi reh sakta...pehli bar they made love that logical but sencond time...its not fair for maan...wo dard main tha aur geet uska dard dur kadna chahthithi, aur v to way hota hain dard dur kadna ka...physically i kyun...its only my opinion that mentally bondness pehle hona chahiye physical ka badme...really feel sad...maan k lie...ha ha vai geet k lie main kaise vul sakti hu k kisiko apni sabkuch lutake pyar kadu itni saal se aur uski reply ye ho...but ye ekdin ho na hi tha.jitna pyar geet dev se kya dev ne nehi.isi lie ye relation tut gaya.but maaneet ka relation kav nehi tutega.ha avi sirf maan pyarkadta hain par ekdin geet v kadega. atlast again geet ko second time lm nehi kadna chahiyethi...Disapprove

JayaR IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
first of all...congrats on new thread...

hhhmmm so finally she is out of that relation to be bound in a new one with Maan...

I really loved their cute little talks about their baby...and him being there for her in court room with out making her obvious of his presence...

I loved how he patiently waited for her fight her war...and opened his arms for her as soon as she managed to win welcome her to a new world where there is love and respect for her only...

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ThugAngel Senior Member

Joined: 08 December 2010
Posts: 266

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Congratulations Graphic #18
on da new tread!!!! i super super super luv this FF!!!
Dhara_s IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3366

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Congrats for the new thread Muskan...Lovely part...It felt so nice to see (read ) Geet giving it back to Dev...ClapClapStarStar
craziekudi IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 14102

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
maan was her strength indirectly!!

loved it 

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