Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 126)

maureen84 Senior Member
maureen84
maureen84

Joined: 04 January 2011
Posts: 662

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 5:28am | IP Logged
i stillcan,t believe ehtesaab had ended
its a story very close to my heart
thnx a lot muski to give such a wonderful journey full of emotions n love
my god bless u

Speechless IF-Rockerz
Speechless
Speechless

Joined: 31 October 2010
Posts: 5603

Posted: 15 June 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
Missing Ehtesaab...Cry but u rocked as alwaysThumbs Up
 MUSKAN

Nidz for u...
...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

muskanp

muskaan_cute19 IF-Dazzler
muskaan_cute19
muskaan_cute19

Joined: 15 September 2010
Posts: 4748

Posted: 17 June 2011 at 7:17am | IP Logged
Nidhi the part was awesome really loved it u potrayed it so very well as we all would have loved it or would love to read it it was exactly the way it should be u didnt left a single thing in it Perfect dear Love it and truly this we will never forget close to our heart just as MuskanBig smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

muskanp

princess163 IF-Dazzler
princess163
princess163

Joined: 11 December 2010
Posts: 4148

Posted: 22 June 2011 at 10:32am | IP Logged

Har  pal jab maine tumse maanga pyaar,

Mere dil ne maanga tumse ehtesaab;
lekin hamaara pyaar to pehle hi kahin kho chuka tha,
Mera dil tab bhi tunhaare liye ro raha tha!
 
Hamare pyaar bhare aashiyane ko tumne bikher diya,
saat janmon ke saath ko tumne chand palon me chodd diya,
hamari yaadon ko tumne kaale rang me rang diya,
Mere sheeshe jaise dil ko tumne choor choor kar diya!
 
Kya tumhe nahin yaad aaye woh lamhe?
Kya pal me bhool gaye pyaar ke woh nagme?
Kyun chod diya ye haath jo umr bhar ke liye thama tha?
Kyun tod diya woh bandhan jo vishwas se humne baandha tha?
 
Tumhe kho kar, maine khud ko khoya tha,
Tunhare liye har pal yeh dil mera roya tha...
Kahan kam pad gayi main, har ghadi khud se poochti thi,
Tumhare kiye gunaah ke liye har din nai sazaa paati thi!
 
Tumhi to mere apne the, kisis aur ko maine kahan jaana...
Jab se pyaar ko jaana, iss dil ne tumhe hi to pehchaana,
tumse bewafaai paakar dil baawanra hua ghoomta tha,
Kitna rokne par bhi yeh sirf tunhi ko dhoondhta tha!
 
Par aaj jab khud ko dekhti hoon,
Apne ko main khushnaseeb samajhti hoon;
Jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai,
kahawat ko apni zindagi mein charitaarth paati hoon!
 
Jo tum na milte to pyaar ko naa pehchaanti,
Aur agar tunhe nahin khoti toh khud ko nahin pehchanti!
jo tum na aate, to dard ko na pehchanti,
Aur tum na jaate to dard ke rishte ko naa maanti!
 
jo tumko na jaanti toh pyaar ke ghaavon ko naa jhelti,
Jo tum ajnabee na ho jaate to pyaar ke malham ki hasi chehre par na khelti!
 
Har pal tumhare baad apne aap ko na dhoondha hai,
Is sangharsh me mee saath, mere pyar ne mijhe puja hai!
Jab kabhi dard ke samandar me khud ko doobta paaya hai,
Mere dard se pyaar karne waale ne mujhe paar pahunchaya hai!
 
Jab-jab apne aatm-sammaan ko chootta hua paaya hai,
Tab mere Maan ne aake mera maan bachaya hai,
Jab kabhi apne aap ko akela khada paaya hai,
Har baar uske pyaar bana mera saaya hai!
 
jab kabhi pyaar ka zikr bhi gar aata hai,
Sirf ek hi naam dil me, ek hi chehra aankhon me samaata hai;
Aaj poore dil se main yeh izhaar karti hoon,
Haan sirf aur sirf Maan se hi pyaar main karti hoon!
 
 
My last tribute to ehtesaab di!
 
Love
Swati

The following 8 member(s) liked the above post:

mishtikhuranazeeenuManpreetmannanks_amsheermeherMeetPremeermuskanp_BlackPearl_

sona-rai IF-Sizzlerz
sona-rai
sona-rai

Joined: 07 July 2010
Posts: 21670

Posted: 22 June 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
very well written nidhiBig smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

muskanp

tanvi04 IF-Rockerz
tanvi04
tanvi04

Joined: 19 December 2010
Posts: 5253

Posted: 22 June 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
awsome part loved it

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

muskanp

puth IF-Dazzler
puth
puth

Joined: 22 February 2010
Posts: 3742

Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
superb nidhi...loved it to bits

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

muskanp

shining_moon IF-Dazzler
shining_moon
shining_moon

Joined: 23 October 2010
Posts: 3067

Posted: 23 June 2011 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
hey muski

first of all I am really sorry for commenting so late...bu I read all the parts regularly...they r just awesome
so far I have loved all ur ffs actually adored themEmbarrassedEmbarrassed but this one was completely different...another side of love that is pain...I must say you have potrayed the emotion so well actually personified it through ehtesaabSmile...hats off to u for thisClapClapClap
the way geet finally came out of the abyss of grief and betrayal was amazing and loved this new maan in ur ff who stood by geet in each n every situation...muuuaahhhEmbarrassed
dev is...ah...forget it I don't have proper slang for him so just ignore himAngryAngry
epilogue was lovely...especially the twin partTongue
awesome mindblowing amazing...I can go on and on with adjectivesSmileSmile

love uHug

anupam

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

muskanp

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
AR short ff - Zindagi Eplge 2-pg 113 IMP INFO 127

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 124 125

Author: AngelTeen   Replies: 999   Views: 122627

AngelTeen 999 122627 26 February 2013 at 1:25am by My_loveis_gone
The Apollonian and Dionysian: (AR) - Complete

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 45 46

Author: EmilyIsaac   Replies: 365   Views: 50240

EmilyIsaac 365 50240 21 February 2013 at 10:40am by amandadsouza95
Khwabon Ki Manzil?new mini AR ff-epilogue

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 15 16

Author: crazy4KASH_AR   Replies: 127   Views: 41207

crazy4KASH_AR 127 41207 14 January 2013 at 8:40pm by amandadsouza95
~Armaan~#3~AR-FF-Pt31 to Epilogue Pg108 (25/01/10)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 109 110

Author: kashishk   Replies: 874   Views: 100048

kashishk 874 100048 28 April 2012 at 4:44pm by danny0072
Belonging - (AR Mini)Epilogue pg42-12/02

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 45 46

Author: simran1285   Replies: 363   Views: 80846

simran1285 363 80846 09 January 2012 at 4:26am by sweetnandu

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index