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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 124)

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Love is the way I got over my hurt you left me to endure. She tightened her grip around maans hand the pain.. that I though had no cure..she hugged Maan & kissed him..dev turned his face in disgust.
LOVED THOSE LINES .TRULY WRITTEN
Maan cupped her face..bahut hogaya...tumhara ehtesaab ..aab ghar challoo geet. she nodded like obeying him was her only desire.
ATLAST .SHE CLEARED HER ACCOUNTABLITY TO DEV .SHE PROVED HERSELF SHE IS NOT A DOLL WHICH CAN MADE FOR DANCE .LOVED IT .
 
Maan .. door band karo na.. koi aa jayega..she pleaded..
 
GEET IS BACK WITH LIFE,LOVE .SHE STARTED  TO LIVE HER LIFE .HER INNOCENCY , HER NAUGHTINESS ,HER BELIEF IN LOVE HAD GIVEN  AGAIN BREATH OF AIR . LOVED IT TO THE CORE .
 
Maan chuckled up in joy & hugged her.. double the happiness spread in their life. The smile in her face..the happiness she spread.. that even an angel might envy!!
she kissed his eyes.. ur she chuckled
like endless sunshine
he laughed
she kissed his nose..
ur my unbelievable treasure
only mine
she said it possessively.. he agreed humbly
she kissed his cheeks
ur my shining unhidden star in the middle of a joyless night
joyless night..
he questioned.. she blushed.. knowing wat he meant
she kissed his lips ur the one that gives happiness to my life..I love u ..love u a lot!!
 
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN .TOOK MY HEART AWAY . LOVED THE ENDING .
 

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
Lovely update. But am sad that you ended it. It was lovely. Loved the way Geet planned their wedding anniversary. Suhaag raat par to he could not see his bride in her laal joda, but now his armaan was fulfilled, apni dulhan ko laal jode me dekhna, uska ghoonghat uthana. Lovely. And what more, they are blessed with 2 angels.

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
Muskan, you finished one more of your FF, or rather say SS. It was wonderful journey with Maan and Geet. Finally they are 2gather and have a double bonanza of angels.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
Fantastic story n nice ending thnx 4 d lovely ff...

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Tis one is for nidhi:-) superb yr... Tis was exactly d way i pictured things happening. Bravo, gr8 work!
For muskan- u never cease to amaze by ur humbleness. U rock girl, seriously:-)

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
A big hi5 to Nidhi for the superb epilogue 2 and for muskan for being so braod-minded. I have always loved the way she gave credit to people who srote peoms and analysis for her FFs. This is a very noble gesture.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Nidhi.

That was wonderful. U have no idea how much i needed that bit in the end. It truly completed Ehtesaab. This story is very close to my heart. Thank you Muskan di, and u Nidhi for this. I really loved this.

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Nidhi's prt was awsome luvd it,hayeee jitna ehtesaab k bare m padho kam h.very well written nidhi.

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