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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 120)

Janakivallav IF-Addictz

Joined: 04 March 2009
Posts: 60096

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Beautiful part.
loved it.
loved  maaneet understand , trust, care for each other.
 loved geet proved herself.
 loved the way maan always protected her and stay besides her as her true partner.
loved the way geet understand maan and maan understand geet.
dev that shameless creature is still same, not a single change , still haughty,to full of himself, shameless, self centered person.
 loved the slap geet gave him by words and by gestured.
 loved they way she kissed maan in front of dev and open declared her love for maan.
both maaneet gave the project in free and in his whole life dev will remember it.

geet fulfill maan's dream by dress up like dulhan .
 now there is no ehetsaab ,
now there is only love between maan, and immense love for each other.

 finally geet told maan those three magical words and maan responds  her well.

their unborn baby's death anniversary, so painful for them.
geet is pregnant of twins
 aww loved it.
 loved maan's excitement regarding this.
loved maaneet's happiness and maan's protectiveness about geet .

loved this part

Maan chuckled up in joy & hugged her.. double the happiness spread in their life. The smile in her face..the happiness she spread.. that even an angel might envy!!
she kissed his eyes.. ur she chuckled like endless sunshine
he laughed
she kissed his nose.. ur my unbelievable treasure
only mine
she said it possessively.. he agreed humbly
she kissed his cheeks ur my shining unhidden star in the middle of a joyless night
joyless night..
he questioned.. she blushed.. knowing wat he meant
she kissed his lips ur the one that gives happiness to my life..I love u u a lot!!

will miss  ehtesaab.
 beautiful emotional story.
how destiny , pain, bring two person close and their pain bind them together and their love, understanding , trust bring them closer and now they r one and waiting for the symbol of love.
thanks  lot muskan for awesome story.
loved this ff.
 love u lotsHug
 God bless u .

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 30 October 2010
Posts: 25213

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
Dia wondering what to comment for it was simply Fabulous.
It was a real roll-coster ride of two souls through pain to reach love,where they become one soul.
It was their journey to reach their love.
Ehtesaab towards their life to get their soul.
Beautifully portrayed!!!
Gawd ...THE KISS ...that would be a really hard slap than a real slap.
Finally he became his Dulhan in all sense ...loved it!!!
aww ...twins ...Maan would have been in cloud nine ...lovely!!!
Beautiful FF ...A Journey of pained Soul to reach its Knight.
Thank u di for the wonderful SS.
Enjoyed it ...cherished it ...Beautiful!!

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Niharika.Nair IF-Rockerz

Joined: 04 March 2011
Posts: 6291

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Happy to see an independent Geet and off course her acceptance of Maan's love...
Thank you Muskan for the lovely SS...will miss ehtesaab and Maneet's twins tooWink

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felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 05 November 2007
Posts: 44357

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Awesome updates di
just catched up stupid Exams LOL
loved it loadz
Will miss this FF
Thanks 4 da pm

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amzu32 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 August 2010
Posts: 2689

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
thank u so much for giving us such an awesome SS.this was the Best Best written SS Clap will miss it alot.
It was really heart touching story.
Beautiful Ending. Hug
omg twin so sweet.

Thanx Clap Hug

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Ramhari IF-Rockerz

Joined: 23 November 2010
Posts: 6689

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Beautiful ending.
The best part was the way Maaneet gave away the project to dev in charity
and Geet kissing Maan claiming herself as his forever.
This was such a contrast to the jealous iss they shared at the party.
Though things were being snatched away from Geet from the beginning.
She was getting back in multiples.
First it was her studies and career she actually studied better and owned a company.
Then Dev's love and she got bountiful  from Maan.
Lastly her baby and she got twins .
Geet completely making herself as Maan's bride ending the ehtesaab was beautiful.
The whole journey was amazing though painful.
Thank you for such a wonderful story.

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-Zahra15- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 22 January 2011
Posts: 8689

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
i loved it...but it has already ended...feeling sad...nyways...thnx...

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divareena IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 16 February 2006
Posts: 16799

Posted: 06 June 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
awww so sweet that they are expecting twins. They can start their life fresh again

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