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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 118)

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mystique_girl

Hey Muskaan,

Loved Ehtesaab, though it was a shade of too sad for me...

Loved your story, your characters, thoughts and the entangled emotions...

Didnt expect you to end so soon though, but its justice to the name SSLOL- though I think you could have taken a couple of more parts to end it smoothly - but I am no story writer and these are just my personal thoughtsEmbarrassed

One thing...apologies for not understanding this well. What happened at the project summit - did Geet take up the project along with Dev or did Maan and Geet leave the project to Dev - and if yes, why did she do it ? What did she try to achieve by asking Maan to back away and she herself did the same(if thats true)...pls reply...not understanding this part is really bugging me...i read comments from all readers but still wasnt able to understand - so waiting for you to give some meaningEmbarrassed

She was all the way struggling to just to get to wat she lost in past few yrs
She left the project & made maan leave it because she wanted it as a slap on dev's face!!!
That he won the project because she left it!!!
Also to make him realize once every thing of his was her world but now nothing of his matters to her!! Not even his loss!!!

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
Awesome update!!! I jst loved it. Gr8 ending di!!! Finally geet said i love u to maan n i loved the twins concept too... No words 4 it!!! U r gr8 writter. I dont know how u managed to express such a beautiful feelings in word... Me saults ur writing. Gonna missed it alot. Fantastic ff n thank u 4 this lovely update!!! Love u love u ummhaa!!

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 6:59am | IP Logged
awsome part ending is good but i think u should wirte some more part in this but u have have ended this soon sad for that but overall awsome

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Sameenaas Goldie
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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 7:26am | IP Logged
Thank U so much for such a beautiful SS Di... Din't expect U to end it so sooon... But U r just gr8!!!! There cud be no better end to it... I guess!!!! Wink Wink Wink

Finally Geet took her revenge or should I say "EHTESAAB" for all the wrong things dev did to her n all the pain she suffered...

This was totally diff story frm ur side as U usually write only love stories... This one was full of pain...
But still... It was amazing!!!!! Infact watever U write is just fab... Patha hi nahi chala wen we fell in love with it...

The last scene of twins was soo sweeet... Loved it!!!! Can't stop falling for Maan...

Love U Di... Gonna miss this SS...
Smile

Edited by Sameenaas - 06 June 2011 at 7:41am

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
im so sad dat it ending
it was amazing
loved da update
 

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
AWESOME ENDING...EVENTHOUGH IT WAS A PAINFUL FF...IT WAS ENJOYABLE TO READ...IT HAD SO MANY EMOTIONS.,...THANX 4 THE WONDERFUL FF

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 7:57am | IP Logged
da endin was totally amazin
lovd it fanx 4 da pm

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 7:58am | IP Logged
wow wat a story thanks for such a beautiful story and keep writing such beautiful stories

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