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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 - Page 92

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: niddzz


thank u so much 4  likin it sarita...me is not a writer just wrote it not bein able to accept the fact that ehtesaab has actually ended...!!!
@red: i totally agree wid u here...!!!! muskan di is really a gem of person...!!! thank u di 4 appreciating it...!!! thank u so very much di...!!!



u shud write more nidzz:)๐Ÿ˜Š

u wr awesome๐Ÿ˜Š

n wht to say abt muskan...

u define her in write words GEM๐Ÿ‘

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Posted: 12 years ago
i stillcan,t believe ehtesaab had ended
its a story very close to my heart
thnx a lot muski to give such a wonderful journey full of emotions n love
my god bless u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Missing Ehtesaab...๐Ÿ˜ญ but u rocked as always๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
 MUSKAN

Nidz for u...
...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nidhi the part was awesome really loved it u potrayed it so very well as we all would have loved it or would love to read it it was exactly the way it should be u didnt left a single thing in it Perfect dear Love it and truly this we will never forget close to our heart just as Muskan๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Har  pal jab maine tumse maanga pyaar,

Mere dil ne maanga tumse ehtesaab;
lekin hamaara pyaar to pehle hi kahin kho chuka tha,
Mera dil tab bhi tunhaare liye ro raha tha!
 
Hamare pyaar bhare aashiyane ko tumne bikher diya,
saat janmon ke saath ko tumne chand palon me chodd diya,
hamari yaadon ko tumne kaale rang me rang diya,
Mere sheeshe jaise dil ko tumne choor choor kar diya!
 
Kya tumhe nahin yaad aaye woh lamhe?
Kya pal me bhool gaye pyaar ke woh nagme?
Kyun chod diya ye haath jo umr bhar ke liye thama tha?
Kyun tod diya woh bandhan jo vishwas se humne baandha tha?
 
Tumhe kho kar, maine khud ko khoya tha,
Tunhare liye har pal yeh dil mera roya tha...
Kahan kam pad gayi main, har ghadi khud se poochti thi,
Tumhare kiye gunaah ke liye har din nai sazaa paati thi!
 
Tumhi to mere apne the, kisis aur ko maine kahan jaana...
Jab se pyaar ko jaana, iss dil ne tumhe hi to pehchaana,
tumse bewafaai paakar dil baawanra hua ghoomta tha,
Kitna rokne par bhi yeh sirf tunhi ko dhoondhta tha!
 
Par aaj jab khud ko dekhti hoon,
Apne ko main khushnaseeb samajhti hoon;
Jo hota hai acche ke liye hota hai,
kahawat ko apni zindagi mein charitaarth paati hoon!
 
Jo tum na milte to pyaar ko naa pehchaanti,
Aur agar tunhe nahin khoti toh khud ko nahin pehchanti!
jo tum na aate, to dard ko na pehchanti,
Aur tum na jaate to dard ke rishte ko naa maanti!
 
jo tumko na jaanti toh pyaar ke ghaavon ko naa jhelti,
Jo tum ajnabee na ho jaate to pyaar ke malham ki hasi chehre par na khelti!
 
Har pal tumhare baad apne aap ko na dhoondha hai,
Is sangharsh me mee saath, mere pyar ne mijhe puja hai!
Jab kabhi dard ke samandar me khud ko doobta paaya hai,
Mere dard se pyaar karne waale ne mujhe paar pahunchaya hai!
 
Jab-jab apne aatm-sammaan ko chootta hua paaya hai,
Tab mere Maan ne aake mera maan bachaya hai,
Jab kabhi apne aap ko akela khada paaya hai,
Har baar uske pyaar bana mera saaya hai!
 
jab kabhi pyaar ka zikr bhi gar aata hai,
Sirf ek hi naam dil me, ek hi chehra aankhon me samaata hai;
Aaj poore dil se main yeh izhaar karti hoon,
Haan sirf aur sirf Maan se hi pyaar main karti hoon!
 
 
My last tribute to ehtesaab di!
 
Love
Swati
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb nidhi...loved it to bits
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey muski

first of all I am really sorry for commenting so late...bu I read all the parts regularly...they r just awesome
so far I have loved all ur ffs actually adored them๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ but this one was completely different...another side of love that is pain...I must say you have potrayed the emotion so well actually personified it through ehtesaab๐Ÿ˜Š...hats off to u for this๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
the way geet finally came out of the abyss of grief and betrayal was amazing and loved this new maan in ur ff who stood by geet in each n every situation...muuuaahhh๐Ÿ˜ณ
dev is...ah...forget it I don't have proper slang for him so just ignore him๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
epilogue was lovely...especially the twin part๐Ÿ˜›
awesome mindblowing amazing...I can go on and on with adjectives๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

love u๐Ÿค—

anupam
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey!!!๐Ÿ˜Š

Loved all the updates!!!!!!!
I read them all long back, could not comment...
 
But meri comment ki koi zaoorat nahi,
FFwas so marvellous...
I loved it a Lot...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
Amazing job!!!!!!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
 
I loved the way Geet gave all to Dev as an account to his love...so called...love...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
 
and the anniversay...epilogue...twins...unbeliavble...๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
 
Congrats on ending yet another beautifulk journey of unconditional love...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
ATTENTION GUYS ..


There is a FF Award Nomination .. so start voting for our Muskanp and her awesome FFs !!!

here is the link .. !!


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1744837
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Posted: 12 years ago
such a breath taking ff
i just cant express my love for this ff
really really reallyyy
mindblowing work
i just LOVED it



Sana..๐Ÿ˜Š