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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 - Page 90

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Posted: 12 years ago

I LOVED IT HOW THEY COMPLETELY ND  TRULY UNITED ❤️❤️...when maan said mujhe chood ke maat jayo ❤️👏....

even I thought maan was angry becuas ehe saw her there with dev but he was angry on himself ..dnt knw what to say jst great ...😍

Maan cupped her face..bahut hogaya...tumhara ehtesaab ..aab ghar challoo geet. she nodded like obeying him was her only desire. obeying him was only her desire  😍😍...AWESOME ...👏👏👏

totally  loved the ending nd epilogue  ❤️❤️❤️❤️...best part geet left the deal she was nt evn interested in see his face it was so lovely nd beautiful ...full of emotions ...

nd good new on death anniversary of baby is like he is cumgn back😊 ... ehtesaab was amazing 👏👏👏❤️❤️❤️

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janu_2006 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

hey

lovely endin.. n epi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
back 
new ff. 
nyc all the best
i will read it soon di
love,
khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome
beautiful ending
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Love is the way I got over my hurt you left me to endure. She tightened her grip around maans hand the pain.. that I though had no cure..she hugged Maan & kissed him..dev turned his face in disgust.
LOVED THOSE LINES .TRULY WRITTEN
Maan cupped her face..bahut hogaya...tumhara ehtesaab ..aab ghar challoo geet. she nodded like obeying him was her only desire.
ATLAST .SHE CLEARED HER ACCOUNTABLITY TO DEV .SHE PROVED HERSELF SHE IS NOT A DOLL WHICH CAN MADE FOR DANCE .LOVED IT .
 
Maan .. door band karo na.. koi aa jayega..she pleaded..
 
GEET IS BACK WITH LIFE,LOVE .SHE STARTED  TO LIVE HER LIFE .HER INNOCENCY , HER NAUGHTINESS ,HER BELIEF IN LOVE HAD GIVEN  AGAIN BREATH OF AIR . LOVED IT TO THE CORE .
 
Maan chuckled up in joy & hugged her.. double the happiness spread in their life. The smile in her face..the happiness she spread.. that even an angel might envy!!
she kissed his eyes.. ur she chuckled
like endless sunshine
he laughed
she kissed his nose..
ur my unbelievable treasure
only mine
she said it possessively.. he agreed humbly
she kissed his cheeks
ur my shining unhidden star in the middle of a joyless night
joyless night..
he questioned.. she blushed.. knowing wat he meant
she kissed his lips ur the one that gives happiness to my life..I love u ..love u a lot!!
 
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN .TOOK MY HEART AWAY . LOVED THE ENDING .
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update. But am sad that you ended it. It was lovely. Loved the way Geet planned their wedding anniversary. Suhaag raat par to he could not see his bride in her laal joda, but now his armaan was fulfilled, apni dulhan ko laal jode me dekhna, uska ghoonghat uthana. Lovely. And what more, they are blessed with 2 angels.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muskan, you finished one more of your FF, or rather say SS. It was wonderful journey with Maan and Geet. Finally they are 2gather and have a double bonanza of angels.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic story n nice ending thnx 4 d lovely ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Tis one is for nidhi:-) superb yr... Tis was exactly d way i pictured things happening. Bravo, gr8 work!
For muskan- u never cease to amaze by ur humbleness. U rock girl, seriously:-)