-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 - Page 31

Posted: 12 years ago
it's so aweome yaar 
loved it
Posted: 12 years ago
It was really nice but y the mu
Posted: 12 years ago
nooo
u cant do this yaar
tthum tho serial waalon se bhi buri ho yaar
u shouldnt have stopped here
knoew it maan would b there to c this
but pain again
oh god
kya likthi ho yaar
loved it
waiting
dont give us the pain of waiting
Posted: 12 years ago
really painful part di...d way maan trying to sooth her pain is really nice but why can't dat dev let them live in peace...
Posted: 12 years ago

another one di...

 

 

Give me your pain…….

 

Give me your pain, I wanna see you happy;

Those wounds are deep but my love is deeper,

I will do whatever it takes to make you happier,

Yes, it hurts, but the pain is sweet if it makes you better!

 

You loved him with your heart and soul,

Yet its you who makes me whole.

Deeper and deeper into my being,

Its just you who can be seen….

 

Your pain stabs me deep in the heart;

It kills me  to see your eyes still hurt.

However hard I try and wish that the pain dies,

It breaks me to see that it just intensifies……

 

He broke your faith, broke you within….

Yes, I am there, was there even then…

The tears that never made their way down your eyes,

They scare me co in them within you the pain still thrives!

 

Today when I saw him, my heart just faltered;

Yet maybe for him your love never altered!

I will go away, clear your name through lies,

If its him with him your happiness lies!

 

Give me your pain, I wanna see you happy,

To do the same, I will cross every boundary…

I will love you till the end of my life…..

Will do whatever it takes to eliminate your strife!

 

 

 

Swati

Posted: 12 years ago
Oh no not again with this Dev's crap...
Posted: 12 years ago

Muskan...why so much pain? and precap says has the pain ended?

That Dev...he left her leaving her sad and he has come back on a wrong time when she is married to someone else and trying to adjust to her new life.
 
Geet...understand that Dev is no longer a part of your life...dont go with him...Think about Maan. He is your husband. He is getting hurt knowingly or unknowingly.
 
Poor Maan...He moved quitely thinking Geet is giving in to Dev's plead...Oh no...I am not feeling as bad for Geet...but I really feel for Maan...he doesnt deserve this.
 
Please update the next part soon...cannot wait
Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Very much emotionaly intence update!!! I hope geet realises her love towards maan sooon
Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful update...

Geet is trying to involve in work just to come over ... and maan is doing all he can for making her feel ok...

Dev---- grrr... i really felt bad for maan... very sad ya... please update soon as the precap is also ?????

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