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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome 👍🏼
Loved their cute nok jhok abt beta beti... 😉
its amazing how maan is always there no matter what for geet... 

I M IN LOVE WITH THIS MAAN... HE IS MY FAVORITE... ❤️

pls continue soon... 
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats 4r d new thread
i hate dev he z a low person
i love maan 4 being der 4 geet
he z a sweet heart
do continue soonnn
i m w8tng😍 4 d play 2 unfold
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Posted: 12 years ago
Btw, congratz for the new thread... 
One request... could u make this a ff instead of a ss... i m in love with this concept... plsss... 



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Edited by Maaneet_Deewani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update. How dare that Lawyer call her a bachlan lady and wo Dev, he did not say anything. She was totally broken. Good that she had her savior standing there to take away all her pains.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank God the judge agreed for divorce. For a moment I thought, he will stick to 1 yr rule. Great that Geet is free now. Dev is really a b🤢
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Posted: 12 years ago
 
Muski di...this is my second for ehtesaab...
 
 
 
Today I  am in mourning,

At the death of a relashionship…

At the death of an emotion…

At the death of my own being

 

You stabbed me repeatedly,

Still the love remained selflessly.

You brutally tortured your Geet,

Yet her love for you survived.

 

Dev's Geet loved him madly;

More than herself….more than herfamily…

More than the world…

More than her own being!

 

Yet you had the power to kill her,

Insulting her, your heart didn't falter?

Blaming her, your conscience didn't prick you??

Paining her-oh! How could you??

 

She was always by your side,

With hope in her heart she took each stride…

Even today didn't you see her?

With your choice on her body…love in her eyes, she walked there!

 

But, you are a soul less murderer…

A cold-blooded person, a disloyal monster…

Yes, yoday you finally succeeded…

The love that was there, finally faded!!

 

When she was insulted didn't you notice??

she stood for herself, to that you pushed it…

She spoke, she slapped, yet didn't cry!

She left you there, silently walked by!!

 

The tears-why didn't they come?

Was it the love that was flowing all along?

Was she afraid the last will flow away?

Was it the remains of the love that she didn't let away?

 

No, it was disgust that you earned!!

Dirt like you isn't worthy of the tears that burned!

The tears are pure…they keep feelings secure…

But, your Geet was dead, the disease was cured!!

 

Who walked out was Geet Handa!

A respectful woman, a would-be mother…

A serene soul, a flower to be treasured,

She will be cherished by the man who loves her!

 

Love

Swati

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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum update...
just lovely one
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Posted: 12 years ago
i m loving this ehtesaab 😊😊
i know i know its too serious 😭😭
but kya karein muski 😳😳
when it comes to your FF or SS 😉😉
we forget everything 😉😉
well continue soon 😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
The update was superb as always...hating dev to core
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome .Dev is really shameless .plsss continue soon.