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FF-Book 2:A TWISTED LOVE-Update 10 sept pg 145 - Page 96

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: .rumki.

awesome update
finally abhiya got twins yepeee
abhay got his memory wow
hope pia will survive
what abt the superiors...they gone or still raichand mansion?

Superiors will be dropping by 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: missglam


Mindblowing aysha...
you have described every detail with such perfection!
Yuppee. . Abhay is back . .
& the two babies were like double dhamaka !!
Loved it
chandni. .n surya r two lil angels. .
I hope their mommy comes back !
Thanx 4 d pm
continue soon
tc

Thanks missglam. I haven't described the births in my last FF SOULMATES so with this one i thought i'll give it a try.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ilove99

i read all ur chappies after so many days but ouch!!!!this update is the BEST EVER ...i really mean it the way u detailed pia and coming of the babies hats off girl!!!!it was real intense scene...i am short of words right now for u.😳

when abhay teared pia's flesh i was like'OMG!what gonna happen' and when the babies came out'wow!lottery buy... one get one free'

 and the part of abhay with babies comforting their father awesome!!this update was too emotional!!abhay coming back to pia but not only becoz of pia but misharjunlove!
...at last jay is now in right track .Also sid loving his niece and nephew moreover encouraging pia and most rar😲consoling abhay.

 but he kept entertaining with his silly talks tooπŸ˜†

just hoping that pia recovers soon i am gonna get the next update even more fab. than this.😳 
 plz plz plz update soon.

Be CoolPia ki recovery time is super fast only 2 updates left so i have to make it speedy.Abhay won't rest in the meantime and is aready turning out to be a fantastic father.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: shivanirajput

oh my goodness
what an update yaar u really rocked
this is one of the best i have ever readπŸ‘
a big πŸ€—to u for this
no words to praise ur writing skills
whole pia's delivery scene was really intense
abhay and sid toring her flesh to get the babies out is truly supernatural
babies comforting abhay wow that scene really brought tears in my eyes😭😭
i hope pia will be fit and fine soon
thanks for pm
please update soon
i just can't wait to read the next part
i know it will be even more awesome

CoolAbhay and Sid's scenes were i know very bloody and intense with Pia's delivery of the baby but i had to make this FF make sense U know.For going through this journey with me and bless. I was moved by the babies as well😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sunu123

hey ayeshaπŸ˜ƒ

awesome awesome awesome update dearπŸ‘...
thnk god abhay remember everything...abhay pia convo was superb dear...
omg abhay teared pia's flesh...that was horrible scene yaar...i was like what's going to happen nxt...but thnx to tara...
omg abhay got lottery buy one get one free...ohh i loved their name chandini n surya...
ohh i loved how babies comfort their father...i was like crying😭😭😭...that was too emotional...
sidπŸ˜†...
hope pia recover fast...loved how misha support abhay...
this is for uπŸ€—
hav a nice day
luv u
sunita

I know Abhay's delivery was a little gross at best but nobody ever said having a vampire baby was going to be clean
Sid ko moke ki faida utana hai ek joke maar ne ke liye
Blow KissI felt emotional writing about the babies
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: RB81

hei aysha,
a double dhamaka with twins..
hope pia comes around very soon n those superiors let them live happily..
will wait for the next update impatiently..

Abhiya's love won't fall so easily.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: pari_smart

Awesome update

Loved it
so Abhiya are blessed with twins how cute
Piya thik ho jayegi naa?
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM

Pia will be fine. She's been through worse things than death itself
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Posted: 12 years ago
abhiya babies !!!! 
that too twins !!!! 
thanks Ayesha for this treat ...😍πŸ₯³πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ₯³πŸ‘πŸ˜ƒ

Superiors will be dropping by 

to bless the babiesπŸ€— I hope and not take them awayπŸ˜’ πŸ˜²
Edited by --sumana13-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: --sumana13--

abhiya babies !!!! 

that too twins !!!! 
thanks Ayesha for this treat ...πŸ˜ƒ

Superiors will be dropping by 

to bless the babiesπŸ€— I hope and not take them awayπŸ˜’ πŸ˜²

So true maybe Superiors might bless the babies we'll see 
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Posted: 12 years ago
So true maybe Superiors might bless the babies we'll see [/QUOTE]
just curious to know will these two be human or vampires or mix of both???❓ πŸ˜•I hope the superiors don't take them away to convert them into vampires ...😲😭😭