first things first...the banner of this part is rocking... like really good... ⭐️ And now, akaash aka shyam ...yaha bhi? 😡 my mom watches that serial n that guys irks me and now i have him here that too in even more evil role? with gun n all? 😲 he killed shopao... i felt really senti reading that part... shopao saved shilpa from that monster n died u have really written the action part amazingly... my heart was beating so fast when shilpa was trying to save herself n the baby frm him and finally their shadi's truth is out...was that all abt "Censored" part? n here i was having wild imaginations 😆 now i hope armaan makes sure akash gets even more punishment...m worried for shilpa's safety...pls dont let anything happen to her or the baby ok? 😲 and now that you have next part written already, can we have an early update? 😛 hehehe gr8 job at this part... :)
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