Saath Nibhaana Saathiya


Saath Nibhaana Saathiya
Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

Game cum OS(s)-Sweet and Spicy Imaginations (Page 5)

LoveMJ Senior Member

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged
She looked up to see that it was her very own husband, Jigar who had slapped her. She was shocked and tears started blurring her vision. She looked towards her mother who just stood there stunned. Then she heard Aham talking.

"Jigar, Kakiji please handle Rashi and her mother, i don't want to see their faces or see them anywhere near Gopi, please," Aham pleaded and stared daggers at both Rashi and her mother.

Rashi was really scared now, Aham looked like he was ready to kill her with his bare hands.

Then she heard Kokila saying with a voice that was dangerously soft "Rashi, take your mother and leave from here immediately,"

Once they were gone, Aham sat down on a chair. Although he looked strong in the outside, inside he was breaking, his heart was crying. If he lost Gopi, he was going to kill those two witches. He did not care how they were related to him.

It had been four hours since the family were in the hospital. The doctors have suggested that they went home and took rest as they would not be of any help at the moment. Aham and Jigar stayed behind after promising to update them of the situation.

As Jigar and Aham sat in the hospital's waiting room...

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they saw Rashi walking in apprehensively. She hadn't seen them but they had seen her Jigar stood up angrily but Rashi turned and saw him before running to Gopi's room and locking it from the inside.

Panicked Ahem and Jigar began knocking on the door. "Rashi!" Jigar shouted "Open up now"

A muffled shout was heard. "Rashi you've caused enough damage leave now!"

"I don't hate her, I don't hate Gopi" they heard Rashi cry "I know I've done wrong to her in the past but she's my sister. I never knew that my mum had done that to her, all I saw was Gopi on the ground and my mum over her, I thought she's fainted or something, I didn't know my mum was going to do that t her, if I'd known I would've stopped her" Rashi continued.

"Why should we believe you?" Jigar questioned angrily.

"You just should. It's all I know, right from when I was little my mum would make me hate her, she'd poison my mind, tell me that she was trying to steal my dad because she didn't have any and I believed her because it seemed that way, my dad adored Gopi and I...I paled in comparison to her. She could pick things up really quickly, cooking, cleaning and I couldn't. I'm sorry, I just, yes it's my mum's fault but it's mine as well, she's my little sister, I should have protected her instead I went along with my mum, I didn't think my mum could ever steer me wrong and I just...I want to make sure she's alright because I'll probably never see her again after today and I want to make sure she knows I love her, because I do despite everything because's Gopi's so lovable" They could hear Rashi crying inside. Ahem looked through the window and saw Rashi placing something on Gopi's bedside before stroking her head. He could see her lips moving but couldn't hear what she was saying which was probably a good thing seeing as it seemed to be a personal moment for them,

He looked over at Jigar and saw him slumped against the hospital wall he seemed to have aged years in the past couple of hours. He wondered how he must have felt? He loved Rashi so much. He looked in the room again and saw Rashi opening the door, he walked in and Jigar followed and stood against the wall, Ahem moved back so she could step around him and watched as she stood in front of Jigar.

"Jigarji, I'm so sorry for hurting you and I hope one day that you'll be able to forgive me, you were such a good husband and you deserve better than me. So if you get divorce papers, I'll sign them and I'll ask for nothing" Jigar's head shot up and he stared wide eyed at Rashi but she had already moved in front of Ahem.

"Jijuji I'm sorry for everything I did to ruin your and Gopi's marriage and I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me. I've broken ties from my mother but I just want you to know that I'm turning myself over the police" she stopped and turned around looking fondly at Gopi "Take care of her, she...she needs to be handled carefully and with love" tears rolled down her cheeks. "I'll go down" she whispered and turned to leave.

A hand shot out and stopped her, Ahem looked to see Gopi, eyes barely open. "Rashi ben" she croaked "Rashi ben don't leave me"

Rashi looked at her before glancing over at Ahem and Jigar who were smiling at Gopi "Okay Gopi, I promise, as long as you need me I won't leave you"

Gopi smiled and Ahem's heart stopped at that. He'd missed her smile. "Rashi ben, I'll always need you, you're my big sister"

Rashi smiled and sat beside her "And you're my little sister"

Ahem and Jigar looked at each other before walking out of the room, they looked at each other and 

Edited by Traxy101 - 31 May 2011 at 2:00pm

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Ahh   you are to nice to rashi ... I would have killed her ...   everyone did such a nice job ...I only wish I could write like all of you...     thank you ...

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Wow! each and every one of you deserve to be awarded for each incredously chapter.  Brilliant minds you got there...I could never write that well..I wish i could try but can't even think of anything to
please keep going.  thank you to each of you writers for a wonderful read. Please do not let raashi escape so easily...let her suffer a ltitle too..jus like gopi did.
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Ahem and Jigar looked at each other before walking out of the room, they looked at each other and laughed. Rashi will never change said Jigar. I gave her too many chances and that is enough if she really want my love she has to suffer for it just like bhabi suffered. Ahem said Jigar your right Rashi never took anything serious and always caused trouble for Gopi and even tried to ruin my relationship. Both ahem and Jigar watched Rashi who was crying telling Gopi how can you still love me after what I did to you. Gopi said no rishi ben I knew you always loved me but mami turned you against me anyways now I know the truth and I am happy that you realized your mistake. Just than ahem and Jigar came inside and ahem said Rashi doesn't deserve your forgiveness Gopi she made you suffer a lot and now she won't Gopi said no ahemji I forgave my big sister she has realized her mistake. Rashi said yes ahem jiju I do realize my mistake and I am sorry for what I did to you. Ahem says

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wow u all r awsome writers Smile
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Edited by aiska89 - 12 June 2011 at 7:03pm
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Hi everyone! Here is my attempt at continuing this story.

Ahem says, "I don't believe you, I will never believe you. Gopi may believe you and forgive you after you shed few tears, and if that's how she feels then its fine, but know that I have her back now."

Jigar also spoke up. "Rashi I agree with bhai completely. I will never trust you. There is a condition to you coming back to Modi Bhavan."

Gopi opened her mouth as if to defend her sister but Jigar gave her a look and that stopped her. "Rashi first you will give up your phone, from now on you will have no cell phone, I don't feel you need one.  Second from this point on you will not contact your mother.  Bhai is going to file charges against your mother for attempted murder."

Both sisters listened silently; they couldn't defend Urmi, even if they wanted to.

Ahem continued from where Jigar left off. "From now on you will be responsible for Gopi's well being, know that even if there is small scratch on her you will be held responsible, and will be escorted out of Modi Bhavan."

Rashi's eyes widened and her mouth gaped open. She couldn't blieve how much listening to her mother would get her in trouble and at this point she had no choice but to listen to the brothers and back off. For right now it's better to follow their instruction and not cause trouble, otherwise she will end up in jail like her mom. She was careful to keep her face blank and tears in her eyes so they don't suspect anything.

Ahem glared at Gopi, as well as Jigar. They knew very well that leopard can't change its colors. They know as soon as Rashi thinks she has won them over, she will try to do something to Gopi. Only reason they are going along at this time is for Gopi, they didn't want to upset Gopi at this time. Gopi will never believe that Rashi is trying to harm her until she sees it from her own eyes; they will wait till Rashi tries again, than there will be no more chances for her.

Jigar and Rashi left for home. Ahem waited for doctor to come and check Gopi and discharge her.

"Ahemji, thank you for giving Rashiben another chance, you'll see she is not a bad person, she really does love me."

Ahem went over to Gopi and sat beside her on the bed. He held both of her hands and kissed her on each hand. "Gopi, why are you so nice? Even after all that she has done to you, you continue to believe her, but I don't trust her one bit. I only gave her a second chance for you, but I will be keeping an eye on her. Now I don't want to talk about her. Do you know how scared I was, when I saw you on the floor in the storage room? You took ten years off my life."

Gopi started crying. "I am sorry Ahemji, it's all my fault, I didn't listen to Maji when she told me not to open the door for anyone but her, but I never thought that mami would try to hurt me like this."

Ahem took Gopi in his arms and rocked her as she cried. "Shhh.  Sweetheart, don't cry, you will make yourself sick, and I can't see you like this."

Gopi stopped crying and looked up at him. They both stared at each other for a long moment. Ahem wiped her tears and kissed her on the forehead.

Few minutes later the doctor came and checked Gopi, after checking her, doctor signaled Ahem to follow him out. "Mr. Modi, your wife was very lucky, she didn't swallow the bleach, because she was unconscious, but she has burns in her mouth from the bleach; make sure she only eats bland food until they heal completely. Also we had to reset her shoulder again she is going to have to rest that arm completely. She seems fine mentally for now, but she might have nightmares from this ordeal, try to keep her from thinking about all this. And I want to see her again in a week."

Ahem thanked the doctor, and went back to the room to help Gopi get ready.

Thirty minutes later they arrived home. Ahem carried Gopi in to the house and all the way up to their room. The whole family gathered around her to be sure she was ok. Once everyone was satisfied, everyone left so she could rest.

Ahem worked as Gopi slept……………..


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