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Maaneet SR/Morning(update PG3) Revisited - by Eva (Page 3)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 2:41am | IP Logged
@Eva: If this was shown on TV, people would had never complained, lol Blushing
Why you don't write FFs? You are a very good writer...

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
 LOVED IT DEAR... it was simple...tender... sensuous and complete with all satisfaction which  was needed in that scene...hope cv's would get some sense...

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 5:09am | IP Logged
it was much more beautiful and believable unlike the sr they showed. imagine Maan who cares so much for his wife looks for an ans when she was so exhuasted and tired aftr all d running. the passion build up didn't happen that's why it failed to touch us. urs was much more gradual. wish cvs had read this before d episode.

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Thank you all for liking it..
 
Yea the way they have shown the SR did not fit at all...
 
It completely went agaist their desposition...
 
To think that Maan would ask such a question when Geet was terrified tired and exhausted was totally wrong in the first place..
 
But then they showed him to go further and being intimate...   no wonder we did not feel what they were showing as there was no reality in that...
 
Who would think about a physical encounter when the wife is terrified... hungry... exhausteed... in such a dire circumstances!!!  that was totally stupid...
 
They just wanted to show that the CON happened and they made the mess they could have shown it early in the morning when two were rested..
 
Well now when they did not think about it...  I thought I will think and see if I could make some sense..    :))))


Edited by evasumi - 20 May 2011 at 8:35am

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Ok few para on the early morning of Maaneet time...
 
 

The cold breeze from the open window made Geet snuggles more in to her husband's side seeking the body warmth in her sleep.  Maan slowly opens his eyes and looks at his wife's delicate sleeping form in his arms..  A tender smile plays on his face remembering their love making.  He tightens his arms around her.  Geet smiles in her sleep and gets more comfortable.   Maan keeps gazing at her adoringly..  Though he thought she should rest but he just could not resist stroking her hair and tucking them behind her ear.  His index finger trailing down the side of her cheek down to circle her luscious lips and further down to the curve of her slender neck..  Geet stirs a bit and slowly opens her eyes. Her head was resting on his chest and her hand was on his bare chest.  She blushes a little.  Seeing her wake up Maan quickly closes his eyes pretending to sleep.  Geet looks at her husband's sleeping form.  Her face lifted up to see the outline of her husband's face.  She pulls herself up a little and looks at the face she loves and adores so much..  She feels she has never seen her husband so beautiful face so closely before..   Automatically her hand wanted to touch the shape of his eyebrows and his long lashes..  she thinks gosh look at those beautiful long lashes any girl would kill for those.. she touches them with a feather like touch as if not to wake him up..  She stops to see if he is awake but Maan was oblivious of all this..  she looks at his pristine nose and her index finger follows the path of her gaze... Her gaze falls on his so beautiful lips..  She traces the perfect M of his upper lip..  getting little bold her finger move to trace his lower lip..  She feels a little movement of his lips as it they curve upward in a tiny smile.  Startled her gaze lifts to his eyes..  She sees him looking at her through his lashes...  She quickly tries to withdraw her hand but Maan catches her hand and presses a warm moist kiss on her palm...  Geet was totally embarrassed and hides her face in his shoulder...   Maan laughs softly and says in a husky tone...  Like what you see Mrs. Khurana?  Geet presses her face more in his shoulder and does not answer..  Maan laughs heartily and pulls himself up in a seating position and pulls Geet with him still her face hidden...  Maan tenderly lifts her face.  But she had her eyes tightly closed and her face was as crimson as delicate rose.  Maan just loved the tint of that blush on his wife's face..  he hugs her tightly saying Geet I totally belong to you mind.. soul and body the way you belong to me.. You can hold me and touch me anytime you like... Blushing Geet hits him on his chest... which makes Maan laugh.  Then he tenderly kisses his wife right on her parted lips and says Good morning Geet.  Geet looks at him through her lashes and smiling says Good morning Maan..   Maan then tells her Geet I wanted to make our 1st union so memorable and never thought the place would be this barn.  Geet softly says Maan nature has always played an important role in our lives.  And it seems that nature brought us in the same kind of place where we spent our first night together hiding in the jungle in H'pur.   Maan says yes Geet I still remember that first hug...   You stole my heart that very moment and I never realized it.   From that very moment you trusted me and it is still the same.

 

Geet nods her head and says you know Maan I wish I could stay here for ever to be with you.  I hate to go back to Beeji's place and sleep in that bed without you being by my side.  Please let's go back to our home.  Let's go back to Delhi.   Maan tenderly kisses her head saying yes Geet just few more days till your Beeji trust me..  and then he says Geet the time is passing by and it is morning already..  Let's get ready and start searching for Nandini and Dev.  Do not know where they are or did they go back home or some one must be searching for us too.   Geet agrees and they both get ready to head outside.  Maan fixes Geet's hair and pats her as she is ready to go..  then Maan turns to reach for his turban but Geet reaches that first and quickly snatching that runs outside with a peal of laughter...  Maan smiles at his wife's trick and calling her name runs after her...

 
hope you will like it...

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
eva di...just brilliant!!Star i have no words. this is much better than the one we got. so romantic and passionate Blushing you could have been the script writer, look what scenes we would have been treated to.

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:58am | IP Logged
Thanks Shalini  :)))
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Sooo cute. loved it.

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