Maaneet SR/Morning(update PG3) Revisited - by Eva - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG😳😳😳
Eva u r such a fabulous writer,i love it so much sweety
i was so pissed off with SR that i,m still fuming at the slightest mention of Maaneet SR lolzzz
but u calmed down
thx a lot for these beautiful moments
me blushing now
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: maureen84

OMG😳😳😳

Eva u r such a fabulous writer,i love it so much sweety
i was so pissed off with SR that i,m still fuming at the slightest mention of Maaneet SR lolzzz
but u calmed down
thx a lot for these beautiful moments
me blushing now

 
Thanks Maureen...  May be CVs did not show us as we all may have blushed too much πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
it z sooo  beautiful .
 thanks a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
very well threshed out...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful! The way an SR should be - unhurried,logical,loving  and absolutely passionate! 

You have beautifully described how they could have turned it into a memorable episode if they had taken into account small but imp facts that both of them were sheer exhausted to go through such an event! Loved the foreplay you described before the actual deed! That just heightens the passion! Wish the CVs get this into their heads.They can show many such passionate moments with some creativity, camera angles and some common sense about love making!
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Posted: 12 years ago
whoaaa...blush blush blush..too bad censor board aka Star one couldn't make arrangement like this for us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Eva: If this was shown on TV, people would had never complained, lol ☺️
Why you don't write FFs? You are a very good writer...
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Posted: 12 years ago
 LOVED IT DEAR... it was simple...tender... sensuous and complete with all satisfaction which  was needed in that scene...hope cv's would get some sense...
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was much more beautiful and believable unlike the sr they showed. imagine Maan who cares so much for his wife looks for an ans when she was so exhuasted and tired aftr all d running. the passion build up didn't happen that's why it failed to touch us. urs was much more gradual. wish cvs had read this before d episode.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you all for liking it..
 
Yea the way they have shown the SR did not fit at all...
 
It completely went agaist their desposition...
 
To think that Maan would ask such a question when Geet was terrified tired and exhausted was totally wrong in the first place..
 
But then they showed him to go further and being intimate...   no wonder we did not feel what they were showing as there was no reality in that...
 
Who would think about a physical encounter when the wife is terrified... hungry... exhausteed... in such a dire circumstances!!!  that was totally stupid...
 
They just wanted to show that the CON happened and they made the mess they could have shown it early in the morning when two were rested..
 
Well now when they did not think about it...  I thought I will think and see if I could make some sense..    :))))
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