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My Perfect Obsession - AbhIya FF;Updt:Pg24PMsLater (Page 13)

Cute_Gal IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Gr8 update Dear..bt m bit confused.. Wats wit Piya actually.. Is it dat she can hear d dead..?? who is she..?? n dat man..scary face..n he wanted help..& piya was d 1 who could help him.. Solve dis mysteries soon yaar.. Continue soon..thanx for d pm..lol.

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:53am | IP Logged
Very Novel Concept Akku...
A 10 on 10 update...
its fab... Piya wud seem physic to others...
But wow! An interesting point already...
Waiting for Abhey... 

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Akankshaa.

a little faith Goldie
a little faith
a little faith

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Sorry for the delay Akanksha,

Chapter Three,

Had Karan just tracked me down to ask if I was going to the dance? It wasn't the same as asking to the dance I love how you weave in the humour from the characterizations, the sign of a good writer.  Every thought of Pia, pulls me closer to her, you have written her endearingly well. EmbarrassedClapStar

My reflection in the mirror grinned back. Beautiful description. True sometimes that reflection is like a cat's tail, part of the whole and yet separate entity too. Star

A blur passed me. The air shimmered about ten feet ahead, a figure taking form in a custodian's shirt and pants. Excellent phrasing of words.  The varied movements in one moment.  Star

'Maybe now you'll pay attention to me.'' You have this excellent manner of weaving the surreal into her reality so that these nightmares glow in vibrancy.  Remarkably done! StarStarStar

I kicked the man, getting my maths teacher instead. Nice detailing again. 

I slipped into unconsciousness. Reminding us that although her life seems like a nightmare it is very much real. Star

Good update. Love Sabah

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PristineSoul IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Update Akansha.. Im suprised that you're just 14. Update soon, But this time a longer chapter
karantakiar Goldie
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
waooo
amazing part swty.
wndrful.
plz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
hey sorry for late commenting
nice partClapconfused about piaConfused, theres so much mysteries n who was the scary man who wants pia's help n why just she could help him?
anyways it wasa nice updt
cont soonSmile
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 8:16am | IP Logged
Awesome update
I hope Piya soon realises her power and Abhay enters soon
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 3:26am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ..SheWolf..

Res..Embarrassed
you know what..seriously I've not read any update till now..so  going to read form the start..
so its gonna take sometime..

and after all my last active day on IF!Cry


Aahh..my twinie//////..your such a Fab..writer re..
mwaah..LOL

do continue soon..!!Smile

I loved the story till now!! and plz continueEmbarrassed
if you don't..aahh..then **SPAMMING**Evil Smile

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