Sabah
@a little faith
Goldie
Sorry for the delay Akanksha,
Chapter Three,
Had Karan just tracked me down to ask if I
was going to the dance? It wasn't the same as asking to the dance I love how you weave in the humour from the characterizations, the sign of a good writer. Every thought of Pia, pulls me closer to her, you have written her endearingly well. 😳👏⭐️
My reflection in the mirror grinned back. Beautiful description. True sometimes that reflection is like a cat's tail, part of the whole and yet separate entity too. ⭐️
A blur passed me. The air shimmered about ten feet ahead, a
figure taking form in a custodian's shirt and pants. Excellent phrasing of words. The varied movements in one moment. ⭐️
'Maybe now you'll pay attention to me.'' You have this excellent manner of weaving the surreal into her reality so that these nightmares glow in vibrancy. Remarkably done! ⭐️⭐️⭐️
I kicked the man, getting my maths teacher instead. Nice detailing again.
I slipped into unconsciousness. Reminding us that although her life seems like a nightmare it is very much real. ⭐️
Good update. Love Sabah
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