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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
ya
this part is where Premeer meet
so its mostly only about them

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Lolz then ur gna have to make it long :P
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
i'll post what ive written so far.
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She gripped onto his shirt and gradually opened her eyes. They both stared in each other's eyes, both lost in a world of their own.  They stayed in the position for a while trying to read the minds of the one another.  It seemed so perfect a bit too perfect.  Neither of them wanted to move.  It was as if time had stopped to watch these two.

Heer slowly got up out of Prem's arms and stood up while he was completely lost in her. He had never felt like this before. All the thoughts came rushing back to Heer. All that she was thinking about were Rishabh's words. She started to step back with tears dripping down her moist eyes.

She needed to get away from this place, just run. She ran as fast as her legs could carry her. Prem didn't know why but he found himself running after her again. He needed to find out why she was in this state.

Heer felt someone grab her arm. It was the same man that had caught her from falling a few minutes ago. He twirled her around so that she was facing him. "Who are you and why don't you leave me alone?" she said angrily.

"What's wrong?" replied Prem. "Tell me, i might be able to help you".

"Just go away! I don't need anyone's help!" she yelled and fell on the floor while crying.  Prem sat down besides her. He wanted to console her that everything would be alright but he knew he didn't have any right to do so. She was just a stranger to him but still he couldn't stop himself.

He placed his hand on hers and said everything would be fine.

Just then the sound of thunder and lightning struck. Heer got petrified and clinged onto him. Prem was surprised by this action and held onto her.

The next thing they felt was heavy rain and they were beginning to get drenched.

Prem told her to get in the car and he would drop her home but she refused saying she would go herself.

"are you mad? Get in the car, its pouring down, i'll drop you off home". She didn't say anything. "Dont you trust me?" he said. "I know im a complete stranger but you can have faith in me".

He opened the door for her and she sat in.

 

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Hmmm thats good better then what i would write whats next?
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:51am | IP Logged
somehow i need to make Prem find out that Heer is Mehers sister
 
and Heer find out that Prem is preets brother
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Hmmm we could have it like Meher is talking to Preet outside the house n like Prem sees him n he finds out everything
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged
hmmm ya
 
wont that be too much in 1 chapter?
 
i dont know
im confused

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