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SS- KOSH~2~ NOTE pg 38 (16 JUNE) (Page 21)

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
KOSH
PART 26


Endless tears dropped put of geets eyes. She wimped when maan came cross & slapped talli! His anger clearly visible. "how dare you? How dare you talk about my child like that!" clear anger was visible. Geet could barely utter a word. She simply wimped under her own breath. Maan safely puts his hand round her, taking her way. Leaving shocking suda & talli! Whos face, bright red.

Arjun & avantika ran in, hearing everything from maan. Everyone seems to be shocked with Tallis word! No one approved a single word from there mouth...

Days have passed, maan staid with geet 24 hours, even in the kitchen sometime... & then eventually taking her along with him! Everyone looked after her every small needs. After shoria, maan who was the oldest, & there first grand child seems to bring new atmosphere along with maan, who seems to fall for geet day by day & making a special space in geet...

Geet 7 months pregnant... Her big stomach clearly visible. She stood in front of the mirror. Staring at it... While maan on the bed. Staring at her.
Geet "what are you looking at?"
Maan "you!"
Geet "stop it!"
Maan "why? I am looking at my child & wife!"
Geet "what ever!" she turns off the light & makes her way to the bed. Maan brings her back in his embrace... Stroking her big stomach. Kissing geets cheek... "she kicked!"
Geet "he!"
Maan "nop! My daughter!" geet did not have any intention to argue with him, she went along, then eventually falling sleep.

Talli & suda now barely talks to her. There relationship seems to not to get wars, but not better either! Whole town was alright with there relationship! It just this two!

Geet does not go to the kitchen any more. Maan looks after her every need. She came outside & sat with avantika who was doing some work, & feeding geet forcefully.
Geet "maa! Aur nahi!"
Avantika "nahi! Nahi! Ae bohot acca hi! Bacci aur tumehere liye." geet roles her eyes. Then maan comes along with something as well.
Geet "ae lo! Now even this!"
Maan "shh! Drink!"
Geet "you lot trying to give me & my baby heart attack!"
Avantika laughs, leaving the two...
Maan "tik hi na!" he mocks... Then helps geet up to go back to the bedroom...

Maan "I have brought you something!"
Geet "dikha!"
Maan "na! Ayhea na! "
Geet "then?"
Maan "bedroom!" both makes there way towards the room. Maan locks the door. She looks at him curiously.
Maan "now look at the mirror!"
Geet "ok!" maan slowly brings out a gold necklace. Geet was surprised with the shock. Maan!!! That's all she could whisper out.
Maan "shhh..." he hugged her from the back with a kiss... Taking her to the bed... With a passionate kiss. He took extra care to make love to her... There life felt so complete with one another... Life felt so sweet... Geet never in her dream thought about her life with maan! It's so weird that god could be so unpredictable. In every way... Every second, every moment...



THE END
i may do one more very long part :)
xxx

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CryTHE END Cry my fav ended so soon KEYMA
 
but it was a nice endClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
WE want EPILOGUEDay Dreaming
with atleast 2 kids
Maannat and Mananv
please
PLEEEAAASSSEEE


Edited by smj1977 - 27 May 2011 at 5:53am

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Originally posted by smj1977

THE END


yep it is...
me will be off soon to..
going to give good end to all ff... then me off.. my uni starting soon... so need to prepare for that.. i was thinking gap year... but i changed it at the last moment xxx

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MANAV and MANNAT



Edited by smj1977 - 27 May 2011 at 5:56am

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 5:57am | IP Logged
fire -- is it true what u just said...

u will be leaving...Cry

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edited my comment on page 24

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beautiful part. loved it.
 but it's end.
 i'll miss this ff.
itna jaldi end ho gaya.
 kya  u'll leave us.
Cry

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 6:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by smj1977

CryTHE END Cry my fav ended so soon KEYMA
 
but it was a nice endClap
 
WE want EPILOGUEDay Dreaming
with atleast 2 kids
Maannat and Mananv
please
PLEEEAAASSSEEE



i will defo :D
xxx

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