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SS- KOSH~2~ NOTE pg 38 (16 JUNE) (Page 2)

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:04am | IP Logged

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congratsss for ur thread...!!

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FireSafireFiree IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:14am | IP Logged
Part 24

i did not want to start thread 2.. but here you go
i think there will be 5- 10 parts

keep commenting will keep updating :)

do comment to motivate me
i will do my OLD LIVE UPDATE :D

suda- maans cousins wife. who looked after talli as her daughter.
suda same age as geet :)

Talli sat there shocked, ill. The fact the geet made this dream world in her brain, the thought she shattered like a broken mirror, it left her no where. Her yes became swollen.
Suda "talli! What's wrong?" talli could not hold the tears any more she broke down instantly on her arm. She loved maan, not just from now, from her childhood. She loved him with everything, how could she forget easily. How could geet move on with him! Specially after!
Talli "how can she do this to me? Why? How could geet move on? Suda! How could she?" tears was not stopping.
Suda "talli! Don't worry. We won't let get go this easily! She have build this hope up. She will solve it."


Geet sat by one of the lake. Hugging her knee. Her mind surrounded by shorias memory, seems like it's rewaking her old memory! It did not help either as maans body posters exactly like him! & it also did not help as when ever he appears she seems to see shoria, & a certain glow comes up! A glow that you could possibly not ignore filling maan with falls hope.

Maan could not help him self to look at her, love her... She is indeed a beautiful women.

Maan "tu tik toh hi na!" geet jumps with his sudden voice. (are you alright)
Geet "ha! Ha me tik hu!" (yes)
Maan "it's getting dark. Lets go." geet smiles uncomfortably & makes her way along with him.

Soon as they entered the room, geet was shocked. Shocked beyond her limit! Room covered with red Rose. Like a sr night! She left shaken again. Yes they have spend a night together but for past few days the guilt eating her inside, specially how will she face talli! Maan slides his hand on her slim waist. Lost in her long flow less hair. Absorbing all the scent. "happy wedding anniversary!" geet left speechless. She never remembered this! Actually to be precise she can't even remember when this marriage thing took place. She chuckled with a faint smile. Not sure how to react or what to say! She actually did not want to say a word!
Maan "mujce pata hi, tuche yad nahi hi! Per me Har sal tere ek phone call ki liya intizaar karti!..." he looks at geet with great concentration. "tune kabhi bhi phone nahi kia!"
Geet looks down in more guilt. Guilt that he have waited for past 10 years this day! Even today she can't remember this. (i know you can't remember, maybe next year)
Maan "per koi bath nahi! I hope next year tujce yad rahega!"
She smiles faintly again.
Maan "tujce pata hi, ki mane hamesha tere letter ki reply KIA! Per kabhi himat nahi hua to post." (do you know i used to wright  letter every year.. reply to yours...)
Geet "it's to late. I am going to get change!" she cuts him off & hurriedly walks in to the loo. She could not face him with all those guilt & top of it, she remembers clearly what she promised talli, & how she betrayed by sleeping with maan! If she was not so week that night nothing like this would have happened! For the first time after shorias death she felt so helpless. Not exactly sure how to react, what to do. She felt so confused. Here she is in her so call honeymoon! How would have talli felt!

Maan knocks on the door, "geet, dinner is here!"
Geet "tu khana shuru kar! Me ati hu!"
Maan "nahi! Me wait karti hu!"
Geet decided not to argue. Knowing how stubborn he is, specially with his age to! Geet felt the shiver again! This is the small maan again! ... The thought of how she used to see him then & now, made her fell more disgust, & guilt. She could not even put her feet out now! Realization! Something she should have done long before.
Geet steps out with wet hair. Lost in her thought. But that had some weird effect on maan... He could not remove his eyes. It's glued to her. Geet stood in front of the mirror, brushing her hair. Lost in her thought when maan came by sliding his hand on her waist. She froze on the spot as his lips started to kiss her neck. She was not sure how to react, before the thought of shoria took over her brain, but now, its realy maan. Its him... & she was not sure at all how to react, or what to do. She have tried to avoid him since there first night... But now, how will she react.. He engulfed her in his arm. She barely could breath as his hand slowly started to undue her blouse. 

next- ?

BLOG allert maybe :)


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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged
o ho...poor geet...she s stuck in such a situation whr she cannot turn her back nw...yea maan hai na...he will tc...eagerly waiting for the next part continue soon... firstDancing...finallyTongue...

Edited by eiya22 - 19 May 2011 at 4:33am

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:45am | IP Logged

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saadi88 Senior Member

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 5:14am | IP Logged
great.waitng for next.update soon.nd congratz for the new thread.
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged

Thanks for a short update...loved how maan has taken control ...hoping to see Geet loving him back soon...

Will wait for the next updateWinkEmbarrassed

Edited by Dilsay - 19 May 2011 at 5:35am

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