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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 9:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nafisa_blossoms

Well done, your story is going at the right pace.





thanks nafisaa i am glad...
you all are liking my story 
thanks once again to all,,,,





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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
update fast...
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                     Hey friends i am back again...
          


PART-14




hetal and kokila is shocked to see gopi like this...
rashi signals her, but she didnt understood her...


ahem: mom i am really very tired. i am going to sleep...
kokila: okay ahem dikra go...i will send gopi vahu..
gopi is confused...
gopi:why me maaji?
kokila:because you are married now and married woman stay with her husband...
gopi: no no i will stay with rashiben...
kokila is worried now...
jigar: kaki if bhabi is not feeling comfortabke than she can sleep with rashi..i dont have any problem..
kokila: but jigar,,,,,
hetal: kokila you know gopi vahu is not well and dont force her anything to do...
kokila:okay mota bhabi as u say...gopi vahu you can sleep with rashi okay...i will tell ahem...

Scene shifts...
rashi and gopi lying on a bed and rashi is thinking about something...
gopi:rashiben are you feelings sleepy?
rashi: why what happened?
gopi: because i am not feeling sleepy...
rashi: you have to sleep and take rest...
gopi: oh rashiben you are so boring? are you missing jeeju?
rashi: jeeju who jeeju?
gopi: oh so you forget my jigar jeeju...
rashi: no no its not like that, now sleep okay we have to get u early in morning...

In the morning:
someone is singing hymn in the morning...everyone thinks gopi is singing hymn. they all gather in the mandir..here a song start...

hai gopal krishan kru aarti teri...

she is red gujrati saree...all of them were happy...she turns with smiling face...everyone is shocked to see her...she is rashi...rashi comes and gives prasad to everyone...everyone ignores her...

kokila: rashi frm tommorrow you will enter in this mandir...gopi vahu use to do this so we will wait for her to doo all the riutals soon...there is no place for strangers here...
rashi: but kakiji i just...
jigar: rashi didnt u listen what kakiji said, now stop your drama go and bring gopi bhabhi down okay...

rashi is in tears goes to room...she wipes her tears...gopi saw and comes to her...
gopi:rashiben what happened?
rashi: ya gopi...
gopi:you were crying rite...
rashi: no baba..there was something in my eyes i was clearing it...
gopi:are you sure...
rashi: yes i am sure...now go and get ready...and ya wear saree today...
gopi:why saree rashiben?
rashi: because you are married now so behave like a married woman okay..now go and be ready...i will wait here

after sometime gopi comes out she was wearing sky blue gujrati saree..she was looking so beautiful...

rashi: hmm my gopi so beautiful but one thing is missing...come with me...
gopi:what...

rashi hold her hand and take her towards mirror...she makes her sit there...gopi sees rashi..rashi puts necklace, her mangalsutra and sindoor...she was looking like a doll...she takes gopi down...ahem looks at her...gopi looks down...rashi goes in a kitchen...gopi was aslo going but kokila stops her...

kokila:gopi vhu you sit here and have your breakfast...
gopi: but i want to help rashiben...
kokila: i know you want to but you are not well so have it ok...
gopi:but...
kokila:enough eat your breakfast...

gopi looks at ahem then kokila and she thinks to herself...

" o lord krishna i dont know what to do? this is my strict mother-in-law and this is ahem my so called husband... i dont know when he smiles, i think he never smiles...and i have to spend my whole life with him...oh lord krishna help me..."

Suddenly someone rings the door bell...mani opens the door...

 he is prasad bharve {dr jitender in dil mil gaye}


munna: he is a nephew of kokila comes from ahemdabad...he is die heart fan of nana patekar so always copies him...{guys i am writing his dialogues in hindi & english both}

mani: yes who is this?
munna: aeeey manizzz this isss munaaz...you knowsss me or notsss
mani:what?
munna:aey girlzzz callsss kokilaazzz kakizzz...thiss is munnazzz
kokila:who is there mani?
mani:nani bhabi some munaaaz there...no no...i mean munna...

kokila comes and sees him...munna smiles...
munna: kaki ji kem cho...saru chey...
kokila: u munna such a long time...come in come in...

gopi:rashiben who is this joker...
rashi: shh...dont sy like this {she laughs}

munna stares at gopi and rashi...
munna:kaki yeh dono deviyaa kaun hai...{who are they}
kokila:munna yeh gopi vahu aur rashi vahu hai, ahem aur jigar ki patni...{this s gopi and rashi vahu, ahem and jigar wife}

munna mouth is open...Shocked
munna: kya baat kar rahi jigar aur woh khadus ki shaadi hogayi...{what jigar and that martinet got married}
gopi laughsLOLLOLLOL: {in rashi ears} see he also says him martinet...we both will have fun...
rashi: shhh...

munaa laughs:he he he he
rashi smiles...
munna:he he he
rashi smiles...
gopi laughs loudly: ha ha ha ha...

ahem looks at gopi...kokila and hetal, jigar also laughs

So friends here i end the chapter...hope you will like it...till then tc








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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
wow pihu awsome story...
please update soon...
rashi and gopi chemistry good...
poor rashi...

just wanna say awsome update





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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by stary_kajal

wow pihu awsome story...
please update soon...
rashi and gopi chemistry good...
poor rashi...

just wanna say awsome update







thanks kajal...hope u like it and enjyed it...


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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ANJ4

thx for update


thank you dear so much...hope u liked it...



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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 10:49am | IP Logged
Really liked this chapter, update soon
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