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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:43am | IP Logged
wow your story is very good, well done. loving the twists . Looking forward to the next update.

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Originally posted by winter30

wow your story is very good, well done. loving the twists . Looking forward to the next update.
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thanks for the lovely comment i will update soon dear...
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
This fic is lovely.
Very nice job with it dear.

I would love to read more of this

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Originally posted by queenyuks

This fic is lovely.
Very nice job with it dear.

I would love to read more of this

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thanks yuks, for your lovely comment...i will update soon...
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PART-3, PAGE 2

Kokila comes out from the car and stops. She comes out from the car and sees the apartment. She looks here and there then goes in the apartment. She knocks at the door. Gopi opens the door and smiles. She is come in.

Gopi: mom you why are you standing outside come in?

Kokila comes in. Gopi touches her feet. Kokila gives her blessing. She stands up having tears in her eyes.

Kokila: why are you crying gopi, what happened?                                                                  

Gopi: No mom I have seen you after so many days that's why? How everybody is in home? How is ahemji? Rashiben, jigar ji and everybody there?

Kokila: everybody is fine there. You tell me how is your studies are going on?

Gopi: everything is all right maaji, good news for you next month I will be able to sit in an exam of B.A standard.

Kokila: that's nice gopi; kanhaji will fulfil all your wishes. Now tell me you are not facing any problem here Na? I am so worried about you?

Gopi: all is well maaji, you don't worry. Can I ask you something?

Kokila: yes sure.

Gopi: I want to become a lawyer. Can I study law after giving this exam?

Kokila: well yes you can gopi. Till then I will make ahem feel that what he had lost and in between I will tell you when you will appear in front of him.

Gopi: yes mom I will. Come on we will have lunch?

Kokila smiles'..gopi brings food for kokila'kokila eats and smiles.

Gopi: mom as I have sent application in some office for job, I am just waiting there response.

Kokila: but why you need a job gopi?

Gopi: maaji I want to stand myself and this is the beginning and all credits go to you mom if you didn't supported me I was goanna die. But you give me a support like my own mom would have given me if she is here with me.

Kokila: I am always there with you gopi and never think that you are alone.

 

Ahem office:

Ahem is checking files. Her secretary comes with a application. Ahem sees this.

Ahem: where are you going lily, and you know that how much work will suffer?

Lily: ahem sir but I have to go my mom is not well? But I am arranging someone who will work instead of me here and she will not give you any complaints?

Ahem: okay are you taking interviews for your post?

Lily: yes sir.

Ahem: okay I will be going to abroad for business trip may be it will take more time. i dont how much, in my absense jigar will come please in two days you conduct interview and hire her okay, I don't want my work to be suffer. Is that understood lily?

Lily: yes sir definitely I will do that you don't worry sir'

Modi Mansion:

In the evening:

Ahem is having his dinner. Today rashi had made dinner, ahem was not fond of it because whatever gopi was but her cooking was good and even ahem can't deny from it. Ahem stops eating food and stand up without eating food.

Kokila: ahem what's this why are you not eating food?

Ahem: mom I am not feeling so hungry. And I am going to sleep

Ahem is standing in front of window. It's raining here

Lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jadhi hai

{ahem is putting his hand on rain

wohi aag seene mein phir jal padhi hai

lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jadhi hai

{ahem is remembering his days with gopi like ahem comes gopi puts pallu, gopi dance with him garba compeition, gopi brings tea for him}

music start:

{gopi is sitting in his jhula and closed her eyes, its raining, baarish ki halki halki bundey gopi ke chehrey pe padh rahi hai.,,,gopi is thinking about ahem..} 

Kuch aise hi din teh woh jab hum miley teh

chaman mein nahin phool dil mein khiley teh

wohi toh hai mausam magar ruth nahin woh

mere sath barsat bhi roh padhi hai

lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jadhi hai

{ahem sees his marriage photo, open his wardrobe {no gopi cloth}... he comes to mirror sees sindoor tiny box..he remembers when gopi puts sindoor in her maang}

Koi kash dil pe jara hath rakh le

mere dil ke tukdoh ko ik sath kar le

magar yeh hai khwabon khayalon ki baatein

kabhi toot kar cheez koi judhi hai

lagi aaj sawan ki phir woh jadhi hai

ahem closes his door and off lights...

IN THE MORNING:

gopi gets a call from KM industries {actually its a kokila modi industry ahem handles it gopi dnt knw about this, gopi gets ready and went to office...lily took interview of all candidates and she got selected for a job. gopi is very happy, lily tell her to join her from today...gopi agrees and she start doing her work..


 

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
LOLLOLsuperb...plz update soon...LOL

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Realy nice can't wait for the next part 

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really nice plz update soon

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