ff-new avtaar {part-19, page-35} - Page 22

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Part-16

Modi family reaches for picnic. It's a very beautiful place cover trees and very spacious. Hetal, kokila and rashi brings all the stuff. They spread a white cloth in a grass to sit. Munna opens a big umbrella. Everyone sits there, ahem is in white shirt and black jeans wearing goggles. Jigar is white-t shirt and grey jacket whereas gopi is in green saree and rashi in light yellow saree. Kokila and hetal are same. Munna sees everyone.

Munna: why everyone is so silent?

Gopi: {in rashi ears} if he will give chance to speak then only someone will speak.

Rashi: {smiles} shh

Munna: Let's play dumsharads.

Rashi: yeah he is right let's play dumsharads.

Munna: okay let's divide a team.

They all divide team. Team a- gopi, ahem, kokila and Chirag and team B- hetal, rashi, jigar and parag and Munna is a captain. So from team-a rashi comes and gopi gives her a name of sautan. Rashi makes face. She turns to her team. Rashi sees jigar who was looking at somewhere, hetal sees rashi.

Rashi starts acting, she puts her thumb down.

Hetal: that means movie is middle one.

Rashi nodes her head, jigar sees rashi. Rashi put her finger on her sindoor and then she shows again that sign to other {the invisible girl}. Then she puts her hand on mangalsutra.

Hetal: sindoor to other girl, your husband… one min one min I am getting it. Ahh yes it is Sautan movie.

Rashi smiles and says yes mummy ji. Every when claps.

Jigar: she is very good acting mum I know her very well,

Rashi listen this and sits beside hetal and she is very upset. Gopi comes and jigar gives her a movie name {the movie name is hum aapke hai kaun}. Gopi smiles, ahem stares gopi, kokila smiles. Gopi starts acting.

Gopi puts hand on her heart and put finger at ahem and wave her hand in asking question.

Ahem: me, {gopi gives signal from her eyes and does the same} ahem confused.

Kokila: gopi vahu are you saying hum.

Gopi nodes her head and smiles. Munna tricks her and shouts.

Munna: cheater! Cheater! Cheater! Gopi bhabi you are cheater, I saw her lips moment she was saying to Hitler {everyone sees at him} I mean ahem.

Gopi: aey munna bhai don't say lie I am telling you, I didn't done anything.

Munna: No I have saw {he puts both his hands on ears shouts loudly {hey kanhajiii}

Ahem sees up and then gopi.

Gopi: what the hell you are a lier! Lier! Lier!

Munna: what you called me lier! You are gopi khopadi..

Gopi sees mannu with catty eyes and stares him, same as munna do. Gopi becomes angry she picks up a glass of water and throws on munna , munna opens her mouth and everyone stands up.

Ahem: gopi what have you done this?

Gopi: why are you scolding me, you scold your brother…

Ahem was not able to say her anything he looks at Munna. Munna sees here and there also feels scared. Suddenly rains starts. They go under tree..

Kokila: oh my god this rain and this season hard to believe, how we will go home. Let's go home dikra.

Ahem: mom I will bring car…jigar come.

Ahem and jigar goes to see car. They see cars, ahem car starts but not jigar car, ahem comes and sees this. Ahem goes back to modi's, ahem gets little bit frustrated.

Kokila: ahem dikra, what happened where is car?

Ahem: mom we can't go home today…

Kokila:{shocked} why?

Ahem: because jigar car is having some problem and only my car can go.

Chirag: do one thing let's stay in hotel.

Hetal: I will call Mani to take care of house…

Kokila: no mota bhabi how can we left home like this. Parag knows driving so we will go all and let these children enjoy.

Hetal: okay kokila lets go then…jigar and ahem you can stay here and come tom with car.

Jigar: okay mom but please call us that you reached home safely.

Hetal: don't worry son, I will. Okay

All big modi's and munna go and ahem sees them going. Jigar sees gopi and smiles.

Jigar: let's go now and I will see some mechanic somewhere.

Ahem, rashi and gopi along with jigar start walking. Jigar sees gopi walking silently with rashi. Ahem is also walking alone. Jigar thinks.

Jigar: rashi come here I want to show you something, {rashi sees jigar}

Rashi: okay jigar ji {she goes}…

Gopi is walking alone and she is feeling cold. Ahem gives his coat to gopi. First gopi hesitate that but after insisting she take and smile. After sometime they saw one hotel. One party is going on there. All four of them go and they reach to reception.

Manager: Yes sir how can I help you?

Ahem: well we need to rooms for one night.

Manager: Ok let me check sir.

Manager checks into his computer.

Manager: We have too rooms but that are very small.

Jigar: why

Manager: because all the booking was made already for reception so that why I can give you other special room. Sorry for the inconvenience.

Ahem: it's okay.

Manager: these are your keys sir, well we have party here so you can enjoy the party {a kind of promotional party of hotel}. All four of them goes to their room. Gopi was about to go. Rashi makes her stop and tell her to go with ahem because she is married now. Gopi goes with ahem at last. ahem opens the door, gopi comes in. ahem sees gopi.

ahem: hmm gopi you have some rest. i m sitting here.

gopi nodes her head.

gopi: ahem ji can you please bring something to eat.

ahem looks at gopi, suddenly there is a knock at the door. ahem opens the door, jigar is there, he comes in.

jigar: bhai manager had told us to come and join the party.

ahem: okay we will come.

jigar goes and ahem turns and see gopi...

So firends here i end the part. hope you will like it. till then tke care and have fun.

Originally posted by: Bloem123

great Update can't wait for teh next part!

Originally posted by: aachus

good going... update soon

Originally posted by: shaina.sharma

nice update dear