Saath Nibhaana Saathiya

ff-new avtaar {part-19, page-35} - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
pihu... u remember me?
any way  i really enjoyed this part...good job...uppdate soon...
waiting for part13

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: vaishali667

fantastic part yaar you had done a great job Gopi lost her memory and of all the people she remembers Rashiben and Urmila  thats really interesting




thankss vaishali, i hope you liked it,,,
ya and more interesting things will going to be there...
just wait,,,,i story will be updated soon...



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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: aachus

pihu... u remember me?
any way  i really enjoyed this part...good job...uppdate soon...
waiting for part13




oh yes dear how can i forget you dear...
you are the first person who commented on my ff...
true friends can never be forgeted, though i dont know you well
but u r frnd...
thank you so much for this lovely comment...
i hope you enjoyed...


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Posted: 12 years ago
 Hello friends sorry for updating late


                    PART-13


Jigar bring rashi  in hospital and opens the door of ICU and rashi is shocked to see gopi in these position. rashi looks jigar. jigar see rashi in anger...😡

rashi: jigar ji what happened to gopi?
jigar: cant you see yourself.. infact i brought you here because gopi bhabi had lost her memory.. she only remember you and your mum ?

rashi is shocked😲to listen this and she goes to gopi and see her with teary eyes...rashi caress her hair. gopi opens her eyes and see rashi...gopi hugs rashi..

rashi: are you okay now?
gopi: you are there na, i am okay? where is mami?
rashi: she will come dont worry...now take rest okay...sleep sleep...

rashi wipes her tears,,,and stands up...jigar sees this...

jigar: please stop your drama.. ur flirty tears are of no use...
rashi: jigar ji i know i have made a sin.. but i never so much bad about gopi and i am feeling sorry for what i have done jigar ji... please forgive me jigar ji...
jigar: stop it i said jiust stop it.. i have given you many chances but now i cant, you are so selfish and mean women, who can do anything for money..you are

doctor: i said stopi it both of you, this is hospital not your home, please resolve your personal issues out of hospital. we have to tke care of patient...

jigar: i am sorry doctor...{he holds rashi hands and take her out from ICU}.
jigar to rashi: you are here becuse of gopi bhabi, we are tolerating you because of gopi bhabi...and dont try to take advantage to this state. i will keep eye on..
dont you dare to tell anything to gopi bhabi i will kill you..understood..

rashi is scared now and she is crying, hetal, kokila and ahem sees this. but no one comes to rashi to support her...

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In the morning gopi gets duscharge from the hospital and ahem comes to gopi..

gopi: you again..why dont you listen me that i am not your wife... {rashi nd jigar come in, gopi sees rashi and comes to her}...
ahem: I have cleared ll the formilties..rashi please bring gopi...
rashi: okay ahem jiju...
gopi: rashiben you also...why you are saying him jiju...when i am not married?
rashi: {put her arms on gopi shulder from bck} see gopi i wanna tell you something, {gopi sees rashi clueless} we both are married now {gopi is shocked 😲} that man i mean ahem jiju {she point finger} is your husband...
gopi: but rashiben i dont rremember anything...
rashi: dont worry i am there na... i will help you okay..now lets go home..
gopi:but rashiben...
rashi: {holds her hands} come gopiii..

they all reach at modi mansion...hetal opens the door and sees them...gopi is confused😕...she looking at home {such a big home} then she sees rashi.. rashi smiles and take her in...kokila sees this...

kokila:{ bg music} one min stop gopi vahu and rashi...

gopi is scared to listen such a dangerous voice and she holds rashi hands...rashi sees gopi...she also hold her hand tightly {she is more scared then gopi}...rashi and gopi sees kokila.She comes to them...

kokila: gopi has lost her memory but you didnt rashi...dont know that whenever we come from somewhere we take kahnaji blessings...

rashi: o sorry kakiji i am realy sorry...come gopi...

kokila: leave it now... i will take gopi... come gopi vahu...

gopi sees rashi: rashiben...
rashi:go gopi she is your mother-in-law...

gopi goes with them and take blessings of lord krishna...kokila tells gopi to take rest...gopi feels scared and runs to rashi and hugs her...

gopi: no i will not go anywhere i will stay with rashiben only...{she start crying}

ahem becomes panic seeing gopi in this state...rashi consoles her...

kokila: dont cry gopi vahu..we all our your owns and love so much dont get scared...

gopi: no no no i dnt knw you. i dont remember anything... {oh my god my head}. gopi was to fall...

ahem come and catches her...she close her eyes.. cmera focus on both of them and their la la la la la music starts...both sees into each other eyes.. they remain in the sme position for some time...

In the night:

every one is taking dinner rashi serves food for everyone.. jigar see rashi and rashi sees jigar..jigar ignores her...gopi comes and sits... she is wearing a suit like this {i am inserting pic}..



ahem is really shock to see her like that {guys this suit she is wearing}...she didnt put and bindi and sindoor, mangalsutra...kokila is also shocked and rashi and hetal also...

so friens here i end the part of u all will like...




















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Posted: 12 years ago

wow nice update good way the story is going

tank  god rashi became positive

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update to your ff. Aww poor Gopi. I hope her memory comes back. Really glad , Rashi has realised that being bad is not good. You have portrayed  the emotions of the charcaters very good especially Rashi. Keep it up.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow, this was a another lovely part
Hope you continue soon!
I feel sorry for Gopi, i wonder what's going to happen next.. 

-Pooja

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Posted: 12 years ago
this twist sounds damn
good maybe ahem can
repent what he did to gopi
& start fresh intro to know
gopi well
lovely part
love it
xxx
waiting next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: shaina.sharma

wow nice update good way the story is going

tank  god rashi became positive




thanks shaina...hope u enjyed...


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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: winter30

Fantastic update to your ff. Aww poor Gopi. I hope her memory comes back. Really glad , Rashi has realised that being bad is not good. You have portrayed  the emotions of the charcaters very good especially Rashi. Keep it up.👏



thanks dear, i hope you liked it...