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Posted: 12 years ago
pihu a yu going to
update dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: vaishali667

really loved part it nice



thanks vaishali so much...



Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bloem123

Thanks for the Update realy loved it!


thanks bloem...i hope u liked it


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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sunshine33

Oh gosh, this was absolutely fantastic!  Eagerly awaiting the next update.



thanks sunshine...i hope u liked it...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: nilli_r

nice update :)

waiting for it !! continue soon !



thanks nili a lot dear... i hope u liked it


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Posted: 12 years ago
[QUOTE=simi91]pihu a yu going to
update dear
[/Q

today i will dear...



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Posted: 12 years ago
yippe me waiting
this 4 yu

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Part-10

Gopi is sitting beside the window and remembering gohem moments...

flashback:
anita in ahem office, how she insulted him...ahem was standing and looking at her like a stature. he didnt said anything...

a music start:
{ a sad song from piya ka ghar zee tv. according to situation gopi remember marriage with ahem and how he came close to gopi}

sona na chandi na taj mahal,
mujhe chahiye meethey meethey woh pal.
jismey piya ki khusboo basi,
mehaki sada meri yeh zindagi,
rahu jismey umar bhar...
merey piya ka ghar...
merey piyaaa ka ghar...

a tear drop from gopi's eyes
gopi: i miss u ahemji

here ahem feels something sitting with anita and suddenly rain start...gopi is sleeping she get a calls...gopi receieve call...

a person: hello are you gopi?
gopi: yes i am gopi, who are you?
a person: {starting laugh} ha ha ha ha you dont know but i know you very well gopi ahem modi.. 
gopi: but who are you?
a person: you dont have to worry about that who i am or not... just wanna say that if you come close little bit close to him. i will kill him...
gopi: what?
a person: didnt you listen, i will kill your ahem... just stay away from him...
gopi: see who ever you are i dont care, and stop calling me i will call police?
a person: {start laughing} ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha {cuts the ph}

Gopi cuts the phone.. she see phone and little bit tensed...She was about to sleep, suddenly someone knock the door bell... gopi jumps on bed...she come to open the door...{slowly slowly she comes to door} and open it... no one is there...she looks here and there no one is there. she close a door and turns someone close his mouth.. what she sees

4 to 5 goons are standing around her {they came from window}...gopi is scared.. gopi is sweating now...a goon came and puts knife on her neck...

a goon: so what did you said on phone i dont care...we are here to make you learn how to care?
gopi: brother, please leave me what i have done?
another goon: you didnt nothing our anything but to whom you have done they send us,,,,{ ha ha ha ha ha}... 
another goon: well bhai, first i will enjoy with this gopi then it will be yours...

{a goon who is holding gopi push gopi to other one}
goon: what happened scared ohhh so sad? but today i will have fun with you..

gopi is crying and yelling but know one to help her...
one goon came and hold gopi hand...
gopi: leave my hand...{she pushes that goon and ran}... 
goon caught her, meanwhile other goons throws all her furniture crack every item they throw...its a mess...
gopi: see dont close to me.. you dont know my husband, he will kill you...
a goon: tell me who? is he a minister, police or what?

gopi folds her hand...a goon come to her and tear her gown... gopi start screaming... goon come to her...

goon: so u didnt listen to us na see what we have done? we can do anything? so mind it... stay away from ahem...

gopi is scared her voice is not coming out and she is unable to react... goons went away leaving him like this only,,, she is sitting and crying...

In the morning:

rashi is seeping and jigar comes there...

jigar: you will never get up early na.. he throws water on rashi...
rashi: {she jumps on bed} what is this? who the hell {she looks at jigar}..jigggar ji you...
jigar: no no rashi speak speak who the hell
rashi: no jigar ji i dontt like someone interrupt in my sleep... 
jigar: get up its early now and make breakfast...
rashi nodes her head...

1 week later...
ahem is worried about gopi... he asked mr sharma about gopi. mr. sharma told that she is on leave as she is not feeling well...ahem ask mr sharma about where gopi leaves and got address...ahem calls kokila...

kokila: hello...
ahem: jai shri krishna mom...
kokila: ha ahem dikra jai shri krishna...
ahem: mom i want to tell you something that i am going somewhere, so i will be late...
kokila: ok ahem dikra...but come in time...
ahem: yeah sure mom...jai shri krishna...

ahem hangs up the call and come out from office and starts his car and goes on his way...





 


Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor gopi when she get
happiness
i hope ahem find out
what happen to gopi
yippe me first to comment


waiting next part

 
Edited by simi91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update  poor gopi when she get
happiness anyway awesome part plz update next part soon