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Posted: 12 years ago


Hi Dear,( I don't know your name)

all the parts are so nice, i can visualise them,

I think it should happen in the serial too,

update the next part soon.

Thanks.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: archanadamania


Hi Dear,( I don't know your name)

all the parts are so nice, i can visualise them,

I think it should happen in the serial too,

update the next part soon.

Thanks.



thanks archana for your lovely comment...
i am glad you liked it i will update soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the Update can't wait so read whats next πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowπŸ‘ what a nice story cant wait update soon please..πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Bloem123

Loved the Update can't wait so read whats next πŸ˜ƒ


thanks dear so much... i will update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: simibrar1990

wowπŸ‘ what a nice story cant wait update soon please..πŸ˜ƒ


thanks dear for your lovely comment i will update soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Nafisa_blossoms

Great update, well done.


thanks nafisa for lovely comment dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part-5, page-6

Ahem comes for breakfast and rashi again with smiling face ready to serve his breakfast. Jigar is looking at rashi. His expressions are changed but rashi didn't understand really. Ahem is not eating properly and kokila is looking at him.

Kokila: what happened ahem dikra? You didn't like the breakfast.

Ahem: my mood is not good and I don't want to have breakfast.

Kokila: today I have made the breakfast. Are you okay?

Ahem: yes mom I am absolutely fine. I am going to office, I will be late today.

Kokila: have something in office and I will send your lunch.

Ahem: jai shri Krishna mom.

Ahem leaves for office and reaches office. Gopi is already in the desk and she is checking some files and all. He goes to his cabin. Put his laptop on table and picks the phone.

Ahem: gopi bring one black coffee to my cabin.

Gopi: good morning sir {ahh gopi I am not sir} ya sure

Ahem puts the receiver down and he is very angry because gopi is calling him again and again sir. Gopi knocks the door and come in. she puts a cup of coffee and goes. The time she turns ahem grabs her arm and pulls her close by holding his waist. Gopi is shocked to see her like this. {Gopi is in green chudidaar and today her hair is tied with clucher and ahem is in dark brown suit}

Gopi: Sir, what is this? What are you doing this?

Ahem makes more closer and he start caress her cheeks. Gopi closes her eyes..

Gopi: sir sirrr

Ahem: {puts finger on her lips} do you really think me that I am your sir gopi?

Gopi opens her eyes and sees ahem. She never thought that ahem can come so close to her. Ahem caress her cheeks.

Gopi: yes you are my sir and I am your employee.

Ahem takes his hand to gopi neck and takes out her mangalsutra out and ahem puts his one finger between mangalsutra and pull gopi closer along with mangalsutra.

Ahem: then what is this then gopi? Who is your husband?

Gopi comes to her senses and get away from ahem, ahem smiles.

Gopi: this is not right and she runs from ahem cabin.

Ahem thinks

"I will bring you back gopi, you are my life and it was my fault that I let you go away, but now I promise myself that I will take you home with me with full rights and respect which you deserve"

Modi mansion:

Hetal and kokila are sitting there and rashi comes and sits with them. Rashi try to ask kokila regarding gopi.

Rashi: mom {hetal} I miss gopi so much I don't know where she is and when she will come back.

Hetal: yes rashi you are right we all miss her. But I don't know where she is god only knows.

Kokila: rashi mota bhabi miss gopi I know the reason but why are you missing gopi the day she gone till now you never asked about her. Today what happened?

Rashi: no kakiji, I was just thinking?

Kokila: oh so you think also rashi' don't give your brain to much stress okay and make sure that you use  it for right purpose.

Rashi sees kakiji and thinks

"This kagadi had ruin my plan I don't why she is sitting like a devil in my horoscope, o lord Krishna please help me out and save me from this devil"

rashi was lost in his thought and jigar saw that.

rashi: jigar ji you what happened? you came so early today?

jigar sees rashi..

jigar: yes rashi do i need a permission to come in my own house?

rashi:no jigar ji nothing like that you sit okay..

jigar: what happened to you rashi i am sitting.

rashi: i mean to say that i will bring a cup of tea.

jigar: wait

rashi: what happened jigar ji.

jigar: give me your cellphone rashi.

rashi:why, do you want to make a call. i dont have balance

jigar: i said na give me your cellphone here.

rashi has no chocie he had to give her cellphone to jigar.

jigar: now what you were saying that you dont have balance then how you make calls to your mom.

rashi is shocked, kokila and hetal sees each other.

hetal: what happened jigar beta {son}

jigar: mom you will not say anything let me handle this. when you went to switzerland you made calls from ahem bhai cell. not only ahem bhai but whole family forgive you and you assured us that it wil not be happen again and we trusted you.

rashi: jigar ji what are you saying i am not understanding anything.

jigar takes out a bill from his bag and show up to rashi. camera focus on rashi faced, she is shocked.

jigar: so rashi now you understood na what i am saying, this time you have repeated the same mistake. so i have decided to take away your cell until unless i feel that you have to make control unncessary expensives.

rashi: but jigar ji..

jigar: but what rashi no more talks okay. you have heard my decision i think we dont need any further conversation.. now go and make a cup of time and dont make it worst as you make.

rashi has tears in her eyes. she goes from there.

hetal: jigar what was this? u made rashi cry

jigar: mom please stop supporting her and u will not say anything i want rashi to become responsible as we all are and its a right time.

kokila: good jigar dikra. i hope u will change rashi.

gangadham apartments:

gopi opens the lock of her door and sits on the sofa she is so shocked that ahem was so close to her, she can feel him now also. ahem is driving his car,he remembers what happened in office and smiles.. gopi closes eyes she saw ahem suddenly she opens her eyes..ahem reaches home..


 

 

 

Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow! ahem decided not to waste any opportunity!! please do continue!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update ...😊😊waiting for more