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SS - Teri Baahon Mein..COMPLETE all parts pg-1 (Page 8)

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@ soumya ..thanks so much ...and i love u too ..lol..
 
@ ivy ..so glad to know that u enjoyed the story so far ..hope u like the way dutta takes care of her in future as well
 
@ ashima ...thanks a lot for ur feed back
 
@ rrs ...updt is almost ready give me another 20 mins to make some changes ..sorry to keep u waiting

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                                                              Fourth step

Nakku looked at him while driving and asked " hum kahan jaa rahe hain?" dutta without taking his eyes off the road replied " wahin jahan hum pehli baar mile the." Nakku thought for a while but couldn't recall the place where they met for the first time " hum kahan mile the ? mujhe kuch yaad nahin..aaj kal mere saath aisa kyun ho raha hai?." Dutta consoled her " koi baat nahin nakku tu dawai kha rahi hai nah..sab theekh ho jayega..chinta mat kar." Still not convinced with his reply she kept quiet and looked down with a grim expression on her face. Dutta gave her a sideways look and found her sad which bothered him a lot. He couldn't bear to see her upset so he lifted her right hand, placed it on the gear under his and used it change the gears. She looked at him with excitement and asked " main gaadi chala rahi hai kya?" he smiled and nodded his head which made her giggle and relieved him to see her happy once again.

They reached the beach where they had met more than a year back. They got down from the jeep and saw hawkers selling different food items " kya khayegi ? hmm pao bhaaji legi?" she rolled her eyes on hearing this " yahan par bhi baaji?" dutta stifled his smile " phir tu hi bata kya lena chahti hai?" she looked around and said " hmm main gola khayegi (crushed ice)..aap loge?" he refused  to have it but bought her what she wanted. They strolled around the shore and watched children play with balls some were busy making castles out of sand.

After she had her crushed ice they sat down on sand and dutta rested his back against a rock. She moved closer to him and whispered in his ear " main apke liye kuch layi hai." He turned his neck and raised his eyebrow, she slipped her hand in his pocket and took out his mouth organ " yeh kahan se mila tujhe?" her eyes sparkled with happiness as she placed it on his palm " aaj apki almari saaf kar rahi thi toh mila..maine chupke se apke kurte main daal diya..aap kitna achcha bajate ho , kuch sunao nah." He brought it close to his mouth and started playing it. She was mesmerized by the music and closed her eyes to enjoy it. After a while when he stopped she opened her eyes, totally smitten by what he had played for her " sahab yeh dhun (tune) nayi hai nah ? kitni pyaari hai..pehle jab aap bajate the toh usmein dard hota tha par aaj.." he interrupted and completed her sentence " sukoon hai tera saath paa kar..pehle dil mein sirf dard tha lekin tere pyar ne mere saare zakhm bhar diye." His words touched her soul and she leaned her head on his shoulder.

 She gazed at the setting sun and the sea waves bubbling with excitement " sahab mujhe lehron ke saath khelna hai,.aapka haath thaam kar uss kshitij (horizon) ko chuna hai." He smiled at her innocent desires " paani abhi thanda hai , khelegi toh bimaar padjayegi aur koi kshitij ko kaise haath laga sakta hai?" she sat up straight and  with teary eyes started whining "aayi bhi mujhe lehron se aur bearish mein khelne nahin deti thi, kehti thi mera kaala rang nikal jayega. Pata mera kitna man karta tha aur ladkiyon ki tarah apni zindagi bitane ka? Lekin mere saath koi nahin khelta tha , sab mera mazaakh udate the.he turned to look at her "  rona bandh kar aur theekh se baat kar , aise bachchon kitarah nahin." She pushed back her tears instantly and he continued "phir tu kya karti thi? Ayi ko mana kyun nahin kiya?she fiddled with the edge of her saree" Sabki baatein chup chap sunti thi, ayi se bhi kuch keh nahin paati thi, uski kya galti , woh toh mera bhala hi chahti thi nah." Dutta thought about their past lives, there was an uncanny similarity between them. Both led their lives according to their family wishes suppressing their own desires. Both lived for others without complaining, ignoring their own happiness. For a long time their lives revolved around their families till they met and realized what they were missing out on. LOVE ? someone who loved them selflessly, CARE ? someone who just thought about them, their needs, their aspirations, COMPANIONSHIP ? someone with whom they could share their innermost desires, fears, joys , sorrows. Someone who could understand them just by looking into their eyes

Dutta scanned the whole area and remembered the last time he had come here for a business deal unaware that he would strike a totally different deal. A deal where this girl would take away all his pain and fill his life with true happiness. That night she was running away for her life only to find the love of her life. Dutta saw her scribbling something uninterestingly on the sand with a twig, he stood up and held his hand out to her. She looked up to him and then his hand in confusion " kya hua lehron mein khelne nahin jaana? Chal uth jaldi." Her face glowed with joy and she sprang to her feet instantly. They both walked towards the waves hand in hand when she saw a balloon seller " sahab mujhe gubbare lene hain."  He stopped the seller and asked "kitne?" she showed him three fingers " ek annay ke liye ek mere liye aur ek baaji ke liye. Aaj maine usey bahut tang kiya nah." She took the three balloons and said " sahab aap chalo main inhe gaadi mein bandh kar aati hai."

 With hands in his pockets he walked ahead slowly and lazily. Suddenly he felt water droplets on his back , he turned around and found nakku splashing water on him. He was delighted to see her kicking the waves, jumping on them, in a way doing what she always craved to do. After some time she held his hand and pointed towards the horizon indicating that she wanted to touch it. He smiled and gave into her wish, they walked slowly cutting through the waves. The water started rising and reached up to their knees when the setting sun sank into the sea leaving the whole area into darkness. It was pointless to go ahead as the horizon was no longer visible, thinking she would be disappointed he looked at her to read her expressions, she pouted and said " koi baat nahin , agli baar hum yahan andhera hone se pehle ayenge,phir khshtij ke paas jayenge." She turned around to go back but lost her balance in deep water, dutta held her by her waist to prevent her from falling and she hung her arms around his neck to steady herself " mujhe laga main gir jayegi." Without taking his eyes off her he replied " mere hote hue tu kabhie gir nahin sakti." And in one swift move he lifted her in his arms so that she wouldn't fall  but couldn't stop her from falling in love with him all over again. He walked back to the shore thinking  he couldn't  promise her that the life ahead would be a bed of roses but what he could promise was that he would step on to every thorn that would come her way. He couldn't bring down the moon and the stars from the sky but his love would lead her path like a guiding star.

LOTS OF LOVE

ROSE
So how was it ???? hope it lived upto ur expectations. please leave a comment behind


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RESERVED!!!
gosh me on a res spree todayConfused
will un res them soonBig smile
anyway thanks in advance cos i know as usual it will be superb!!!Embarrassed
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Very beautyful updateClapClapClap Waiting for thenext partSmile 

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You have a wonderful way of exprssing your thoughts, enjoyed reading all the parts.Smile 

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No words to descibe how beautiful it isEmbarrassed...U bring out Essence Of Tasha Relationship so well...Such purity, sincerity & deep Love for each other is often difficult to put across, but you do it with finesseThumbs Up
I would once again Like to repeat Myself...You are really a great writer and your understanding for Tasha's Love and their characters is awesome.ClapClap
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awesome rose
fabulous update as always
love it
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