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SS - Teri Baahon Mein..COMPLETE all parts pg-1 (Page 5)

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
aww loved it
 
such an emotional n cute update
 
loved the end d most..aww she kissd hm beter n den d eye closing..bless
 
yeh dutta she loves u no mater wa d situation...n yh its time u tuk care of her
 
thnx 4 pm rose
 
contr soon pls.x

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Hi Rose,

It was really nice and too good...plz update soon...Smile

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
@ sinak ..thanks dear
 
@ mlshe .. glad u liked the innocent nakku and her actions. hope u enjoy the next part as well
 
@ geeta ..hey thanks a lot for ur feedback..
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged

                                                  

                                                                           Third step

Next morning dutta was reading the newspaper in his room while nakku was busy getting ready. She asked him "sahab main ek choti kare ke do ?" dutta continued reading the paper and without looking at her replied "ek". After she was done with her braiding the plait she swayed in front of him holding her saree up and shifted her weight from one foot to the other "main kaisi lag rahi hai?". Dutta kept the paper aside, examined her then walked up to her and pulled the edge of the saree which she had tugged around her waist. He freed the saree from her hands,adjusted it properly, opened his cupboard took out the mangal sutra from his kurtas pocket and tied it around her neck. She looked at him in delight while he held her hand and took her near the dressing table, he filled her parting with a pinch of vermillion and kissed her forehead softly "ab taiyaar hai tu." She giggled while dutta continued " chal ab nashta kar le"

Both of them sat down and dutta handed her a plate of poha, she fiddled with the spoon when dutta gave her a questioning look. She held out a spoonful towards his mouth making him think that some things never change. He opened his mouth and had it after which she too started having the poha.

"nakku itne din tu us basti main kya karti rehti thi?" she looked up from her plate and made a crying face "kya karti thi main bachchon ke saath khelti thi , apka intezaar karti thi aur apko yaad kar ke bahut roti thi..itne din kyun laga diye? Apko mera khyal nahin aaya..pata main kitni akeli thi wahan par." Dutta cursed himself under his breath for making her go through hell. He lowered his head and thought no matter how much he tried to sooth away her pain he always ended up hurting her more than before. He turned his head sideways and whispered which went unheard by her "bahut bura hai tera sahab ..tujhe takleef ke sivah kuch nahin deta phirbhi tu uss se kitna pyar karti hai." He pushed back his tears and turned towards her, she lifted another spoonful to his mouth and he had it quietly without taking his eyes off her face.

Just then baaji entered the room "bhau humein abhi meeting ke liye jaana hoga" dutta stood up and replied "main nakku ko chod kar nahin ja sakta , tu meeting main akela chala ja." Baaji gazed at nakku but persisted "bhau main samajhta hai par yeh meeting apke liye zaroori hai, sabko dhandhe main yakeen dilane ke liye ki aap zinda ho aur wapis aa gaye ho." Dutta thought about it and felt yes it was necessary for him to attend that meeting "theekh hai chal tu gadi nikal main aata hoon." On hearing this nakku grabbed his arm tightly "main bhi jayegi saath main." Dutta took a deep breath and replied " nakku main kaam se jaa raha hoon tu wahan kya karegi? Tu ghar par hi ruk main jaldi se wapis aa jaunga." But she was adamant and filled her with tears " nahin aap phir se mujhe chod kar chale jaoge, main yahan akeli kya karegi? Main bhi jayegi ..bas" dutta freed his arm and cupped her face " main tujhe kabhi chod kar nahin jaunga aur tu akeli thodi hai yahana par ..sab hain tere saath ..jab tak main nahin aata tu annay ke saath kheliyo." She made a confused face and asked "yeh annay kaun hai?" to which baaji replied " arey annay , kala tai aur kishore bhau ka beta. Tu bhool gayi?" she knotted her eyebrows and thought hard but failed to remember them. Dutta didn't want her to pressurize herself so said " jyada soch mat , apne aap yaad ajayega aur phir jab sham ko main lautunga toh tujhe ghumaane le ke jaunga..thekh hai." Her face lit up with excitement "sach hum ghumne jayenge?" dutta left her face and gave her reassuring look then turned to follow  baaji who had already left but she held his kurta from behind. He sighed and asked her patiently " ab kya nakku?" she picked up a glass of butter milk and offered him " yeh pee kar jao, aise bina kuch liye main jaane nahin degi." Dutta rolled his eyes and had a few sips, he was about to keep the glass back when she pushed it back to his mouth, he had no choice but to finish it. He gave her the empty glass back " ab jaoon?" she nodded her head in negation then took the edge of her saree and wiped off his white moustache " ab jao." Dutta smiled and left the room.

He walked towards the jeep where baaji was already waiting for him. He could feel her gaze on him so he lifted his head and looked at the open window of his room. She was standing there holding the curtain, their eyes met and she slowly raised her hand to wave out to him. He smiled and waved back , baaji saw this and he too waved at nakku excitedly but she stuck her tongue out to him and turned around showing him her back. Baaji felt a little embarrassed and moved his raised hand through his hair " bhau chal issey pehle yeh mera aur kachra kare." An amused dutta joined him in the jeep.

In the evening duji came back from work and went to tashas bedroom. A tired baaji sat on the bed while dutta had water. Annay opened the door with a bang and looked around for nakku " nakku maami hai kya yahan ..hum log luka chupi (hide n seek) khel rahe the?" baaji scanned the room and replied " nahin re , yahan humare ilava koi nahin hai , tu neeche dhoondh ." soon baajis cell started ringing , the signals were weak so he got up to leave the room. He had taken just a step when he fell down,confused dutta gave him his hand" kya baaji ? apne joote ke lace toh theekh se bandha kar, dekh gir gaya nah." Baaji nodded his head and went out, dutta closed the door and called out " nakku bahar aa ja sab chale gaye hain." Nakku who was hiding under the bed crawled out slowly and stood up " apko kaise pata main yahan chipi thi..maine toh kuch nahin bola." Dutta rolled his sleeves up and said " baaji ke jooton ke lace ek saath kisne bandhe taaki woh gir jaaye?" she gave him a sheepish grin and placed her hands on her waist " woh humesha apko kaam par le jaata hai , aaj bhi lekar gaya tha..ab lekar dhikaye." He held her by her shoulders and said " kaam toh karna padta hai nah? Le main aa gaya ..ab taiyaar ho jaa ghumne nahin jaana."  To which she replied " main toh subha se taiyaar hai..apke kapde nikal diye hain, aap taiyaar ho jao." Dutta picked up his clothes and asked while walking towards the washroom " toh aaj din bhar kya kiya?" nakku followed him and said " hmm pehle AS ke saath puja ki , phir khana khaya aur phir annay ke saath luka chupi kheli aur uske baad aap?." Dutta interrupted and stopped her " ab kya andhar aayegi mere saath?"  she lowered her head in embarrassment " nahin nahin aap ja kar kapde badlo main yahin rukti hai."

After a few minutes tasha walked out of patil niwas, baaji was standing near the gate,as usual talking to someone on his cell. Dutta was a step ahead of nakku holding her hand when they crossed baaji , nakku patted him on his shoulder and said teasingly " main jaa rahi sahab ke saath ghumne." Baaji was happy for her while she pointed towards his shoe laces " theekh se bandh inko nahin toh gir jayega..kahe toh main baandh doon phirse." Baaji gave her a confused look, dutta immediately dragged her towards the jeep before she could bend down to tie baajis laces once again. He suppressed his smile " chal baith jaldi se der ho rahi hai." Nakku got into the jeep and saw baaji looking down at his shoe laces for a moment she felt bad for him. She turned her neck and found the back side of the jeep empty " waise peeche kaafi jagah khaali hai, issey bhi le chalein saath mein , itna bhi bura nahin hai." She waited for dutta to reply but before he could do so she said " nahin nahin rehne do ..jab dekho humare beech mein tapak padta hai." This time dutta couldn't control his smile and laughed out loud.

Lots of love

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So how was it ? hope u enjoyed it , plz share ur views , they mean a lot to me.

coming up

some sweet tasha moments.Embarrassed



Edited by stranger2rose - 26 May 2011 at 12:49am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged
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OMG rose fab update
love it
sometimes i enjoy naku's condition and sometimes feel very bad
poor dutta feels himself guilty for her condition but me think he is right
love naku teasing baaji and  dialogue "
nahin nahin rehne do ..jab dekho humare beech mein tapak padta hai" was awesome dear

great update dear
thanks for pm



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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:40am | IP Logged
Awesome partEmbarrassed rose very well writtenClapClap,oh was in tasha dream land after reading this part ,so cute and nice to see Tasha scenes which you write ,you brought innocent nakuu and caring and patient dutta very wellEmbarrassed , dutta put the MS back and also sindhoor Big smileoh when nakuu feed dutta  first spoon he realized some things never change so sweetBig smile oh nakuu ziddi do not want dutta to go for workLOL poor dutta he has to be patient and he said he will take her out when he returnsWink ,baji and nakuu oh you brought this also very niceROFLROFL poor baji and last sentence by nakuu first she want baji then she do not want ROFL very well written really you are the Saviour of Tasha for us, Thanks a lot jaldi next part update karoWinkHug

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Superb update n I loved reading itEmbarrassed

Lol nakku hiding under the bed n tying baaji's shoe lace!!LOL

I loved it how nakku still have not forgotten the their relationship n how she wits for him to eat first!!Embarrassed

Dutta feeling bad for giving her pain was so so sad!!OuchOuch

I really  liked how dutta helping her to get ready, it was so sweetEmbarrassedDay Dreaming

 

And last taking nakku out for a round and what nakku syas last!! Just so cute!! Even dutta couldn't help but laugh!!EmbarrassedLOL

 

V nice updateEmbarrassed

Thank u so much n looking forward to read the next part soon Big smile



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good story carry on

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