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SS - Teri Baahon Mein..COMPLETE all parts pg-1 (Page 3)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Awesome, very well written .
Just wish we get to see this sometime soon with Mishal and Mahi.
 
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Beautifully written, Rose. The amazing FF's contributed by you and  other forum members helps me re-live the Tasha and Duji moments.Day Dreaming

Thank you dear. Waiting for the updateBig smile



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@ lekz ..thanks so much for appreciating the updt , like u we all wish that mishal comes back .

@ ivy ..so happy to know that u enjoyed reading it..will updt soon..thanks a lot

@ sinak ..thanks as always for loving the updt.

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                                                            Second step

They remained in each others arms for don't know how long and would have remained so had they not heard baajis whistling and children laughing. Dutta broke the hug reluctantly and took nakkus face in his hands "sahab aap kahan chale gaye the mujhe chod kar ? pata hai main kitna darr gayi thi ..maine apko kitna dhoonda , apki gadi ke peeche bhi bhaagi lekin aap mujhe akela chod kar chale gay. Aisa koi karta hai kya ? apko maaloom main kitna roti thi apke liye." Dutta had a confused look on his face on hearing the way she spoke and behaved. He stared at her for long to make out why she was acting like a child when one of the kids slapped his forehead and said " achcha toh yeh hain tere sahab .yeh kali jeep dekhkar chilaane lagi mere sahab aa gaye aur yahan bhaag aayi.itne dinon se subha sham tu inka naam leti rehti thi.?" Nakku nodded her head and the kid continued "arey sahab apko pata nahin , yeh paglon ki tarah apko dhoonti rehti thi , na kuch khaati thi nah peeti thi bus apka naam leti thi..achcha hua aap aa gaye..yeh ek dum yedi (mad) ho gayi hai." Dutta dropped his hands in shock while nakku moved closer and rested her head on his chest and held his collar tightly " main ab apne sahab ke saath jayegi." Baaji failed to understand what was going around so called her out " nakku yeh tujhe kya ho gaya hai , dekh meri taraf ..tu mujhe nahin pehchaanti ?" nakku lifted her gaze and met his eyes then said "vaheni bol." Making him smile. But duttas heart twisted in pain on seeing her like that "baaji ghar jaane se pehle mujhe issey doctor ke le jana hai ..chal." nakku lifted her head and said " sahab apko sar par chot lagi hai nah ? humein doctor ko dikhana chaiye ..chalo jaldi chalo." One of the kids held her hand " tu jaa rahi hai humein chod kar?" nakku smiled at him "mere sahab ko chot lagi hai nah toh mujhe doctor ke pass jana hoga ..sahab jab theekh ho jayenge toh main ayegi tum sab se milne ..pucca." saying so she waved out to them and left with dutta and baaji.

The doctor examined her carefully and said " sar par chot lagne ki wajah se yeh apna mansik santulan (mental baance) kho chuki hain ..isliye yeh chote bachche ki tarah pesh aati hain aur inhein apni pichli zindagi ka thoda bahut yaad hai ..agar yeh zabardasti apne dimaag par zor dalein toh shayad yeh puri tarah paagal ho jaayein ..isliye inhein aaram karna chaiye aur main kuch dawaaiyan likhe deta hoon jiss se inki bechaini (hyper tension) kam hogi ..ab toh aap wapis aa gaye hain , phir apne parivar ke saath rahengi toh dheere dheere inhein sab yaad aa jayega."

At patil niwas AS,leela,roops and sudarshan were happy to see tasha back. AS went close to tasha and said "chalo aaj pura parivar ek saath milkar khana khayega."but nakku took a step back held duttas sleeve and hid behind him. Her strange behavior amazed everybody so dutta gave her a side hug and asked " nakku yeh AS hain ..tujhse kitna pyar karti hain ..pehchaana tune ?" she bit her lower lip , left his kurta and bent down to touch AS feet. AS blessed her lovingly and looked at dutta trying to figure out what was wrong with nakku. Dutta understood her dilemma and told roops to take nakku to the room but nakku turned around and said "sahab mujhe pata hai apka kamra upar hai nah ..main chali jayegi." When roops asked her " kya hua vaheni aap hum sab ko bhool gayi ho kya?" nakku played with the edge of her duppatta and replied "nahin..tum cute cute ho na ?" roops frowned at her and then said " oh haan so cute nah?" which brought a smile on everybodys faces. Nakku climbed a few step to her room but then stopped and called out to dutta " sahab aap jaldi aana mujhe akele darr lagta hai?main apka intezaar kar rahi hai ..theekh hai." Dutta sighed and told everybody about nakkus condition which made AS teary and rest shocked.

With a heavy heart he went to his room and sat on the bed holding his head in his hands. Why was his happiness always so short lived? A few hours back he was delighted to have her back in his life, the fact had not even sunk in when he came to know that she had lost her mental balance. she only dreamt and wished to lead her remaining life with him in a simple and peaceful manner, was it too much to ask for? Had he sinned so much that now he didn't deserve any happiness? Why did destiny always play hide and seekh with them? He could endure any amount of physical pain inflicted on him but when it came to emotional pain, nakku always supported and understood him. She filled the emotional void in his life, he needed her whenever he was mentally drained out and she was always there for him. He had always seen her strong and tough, no matter what happened she never broke down neither did let him break down but now she was weak and vulnerable, he didn't know how to handle her. Everything seemed lost to him.

Nakku came out from the washroom and saw him pressing his head. She stood in front of him and said "sahab sar mein dard ho raha hai?" he lifted his head and nodded "main paari kare ?? dard gayab ho jayega." He narrowed his eyes on hearing this then she placed her hand on one side of his face and kissed his forehead softly "ab dard ho raha hai?" he smiled at her innocence and said "nahin..gayab ho gaya" her eyes sparkled with pride. He stood up to give her medicine, seeing which she made a face but he told her that by having it she would have a sound sleep. After having it she climbed on the bed, laid down and patted the left side of the bed indicating him to sleep next to her. He switched off the lights and joined her but sleep eluded him so he kept on staring at the ceiling. After a few minutes nakku raised herself on her elbows and covered his eyes with her fingers " raat bahut ho gayi hai ab sone ka ..haan" she waited for sometime to see if he opened his eyes again or not , when he didn't she leaned her head on his shoulder and shut her eyes. He thought to himself NO , everything was not lost,she still cared for him like nobody ever did. She could still feel his pain. A lot had happened in those last few days, she had forgotten a lot many things but not him, not his love and not their relationship. She was still that same old nakku who loved him to death and who wanted just him in her life. In their relationship it was always he who gained and she lost happily but now he would support and understand her something which he failed to do earlier. He had to do it not only for her sake but for himself as well. She was his heart and soul, he just couldn't live without her. With that he wrapped his arm around her waist and brought his life closer..closer to his heart..

Sukoon dil ko mile aake teri baahon mein.

Lots of love

ROSE

so friends how was it ? plz do let me know if u like this innocent childish nakku or not. waiting for ur views



Edited by stranger2rose - 23 May 2011 at 12:29am

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Thanx alot for the wonderful update and Pm...Loved the update ...Hug
Awww so finally Tasha ReunionDay DreamingIt really bought joy of tears in my eyesCry...so emotional and beautiful yaarWink...Dutta and baaji are shock and sad to see her in this condition Embarrassed...But Dutta"s Love will soon bring Her back to normal state ...can"t wait to see tasha romance ...u rocked it yaar...keep up the good work ...ClapThumbs Up...pls jaldi update karna...u take care and see ya around
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   nice  one  yaar...
tasha  r  back  at  PN  n  everybody  worry  for  their  naku  na...that  kinda  care  only  she  needed n  am  happy  that  she  got  her  love  back  n  yes  naku  in  this  condn  also  never  forget  his  saab...it  was really  touchy...loved  it...
looking  fwd...

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U know it hurts so bad when i try to read this..coz we can never see this now...There was absolutely no need to bring things to this end but some ppl's ego...GRRR

Very sweetly written rose...Dutta's pain for nakku's condition was palpable..thanks for PM

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Superb!!!
Loved the update! 
She still knows what their relationship n he too knows how much she loves him*sigh*
Beautiful dear :)
Waiting eagle for the next part :)
Thanks for the PM Rose :D

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