Beautiful...👏
A superb updt with a superb ending...
Seventh step
im loving this the way u called every update a step towrds getting tasha together ,its just feels so nice :D
Hmm Dutta going ahead with the plan , he now wants to get his Naku back and finally its time for action ,
he asks her to go to mandir and i love her innocnt reply <3
she indeed know his saab very well :D
aww i also wish that N regains her memorynow ,
though i must confess the way u atke the whole pagal track is worth
Hatts of f
great Rose ,
it was simply superbbb:)
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omg the whole Mandir scene is so emotional,
its the same place they lost each other and never really got Naku
and wht if he loses her competely now ,
but Dutta has to give himself a chance , Naku a chance ,
give chance to Naku belive
amazing scene
the turmoil Dutta in and how even N is so not feeling good abt this place :(
amazing scene ,
if u just understand the feeling of the lovers who meet after years and are aksed to prove their love yet again
Omg Rose , even i know its just a plan
Naku condition makes me cry
why it had to be like that ,
why they got seperated and why she gone mad ,
so many why and no answer :(
feeling so sad for N and the scene u describe when her voice didnt coem out :(
its so sad :(
and wooo thank god Baaji was dere to save her
and again D is cursing himslef for Naku bleeding !
its all so sad
Her head was bandaged and doctors waited for her to regain her conscious before they could say anything about her state. She laid on the bed with closed eyes while dutta sat close to her on the stool holding her hand waiting for her to open her eyes. He looked at her carefully and spoke softly " main janta hoon tu mujhe sun sakti hai bus mujhe tang karne ke liye aankhein bandh kare hue hai. Maine bhi toh tujhe bahut dard diya hai kabhi jaan bhujhkar aur kabhi anjaane mein..lekin ab jab mein tere bina adhura hoon tu mujhse ruthi hui hai..jab bhi chaha tujhe duniya ki har khushi doon anjane mein tujhe aur takleef de baithta hoon." Tears welled up in his eyes on seeing her like this, if today anything wrong happened to her he would never ever be able to forgive himself. He kissed the hand he was holding and continued " tere aane se mujhe sacha pyar mila , sacha jeevan sathi mila , jism main hoon meri jaan hai tu , bin tere main kuch nahin." He sat next to her on the bed and moved the hair falling on her forehead, he smiled through his tears and said " soch rahi hogi ki jab hosh mein hoti hai tab toh main kuch nahin kehta aur aaj chup hi nahin ho raha..apni aankhein khol nah nakku..tujhse apne dil ki har baat kehna chahta hoon..mere pyar ka aur imtihan na le." A tear rolled down his eye and fell on her cheek, he felt somebody pressing his shoulder, he turned around and saw AS standing, he felt emotionally weak so couldn't stop himself from hugging her.
@red he is talking like a kid
he is saying what is in heart forever !
@green he knows , knows that N is the right person , the one for whom he can wait for 7 janams :D
@pink oh love this kiddish side of D :D
he indeed never say anything :D
OMg Rose
u are my Anil deshmukh
dutta dialogues are to die for :(
he is just venting his heart out to the women he love , the women he has once cursed , punished but she is the women who is all to him ,
she is his everything ,
oMG rose u just bring all th faded cruel memories back !
Duta feels so guilty and ashamed !
and here this women is only thinkg abt u even in her dizziness !
he is indeed the luckiest guy of teh world
to have her :)
loved what he said that he iis not gonna leave her everrr !
Oh god i was so missing that naku
she talked to vibranntly again ,
the way she looked at D
and the way she keeps on holding his hands :D
amazing and
wooo what is coming up
excited to read and a lil scared too
LOve it Roseee !
amazing , amazing twist she is just not all fine in an instant but will take time !
OH Rose beautifull story beautifully written
understand this some stories are amazing but if write badly is utter failure
but u wtrite beautifully
i love reading what ever u write
its a pleasure and honour to call you " FANTASTIC ROSE "
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