Baby Hua Thab Bhi Pyar Waisa! - part 37 updated - Page 77

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by sirjee


waooo...wat a beautiful nite...nivren always makes perfect rpomance...hope to see dem in reality doin such romantic scenes...in another show...superb job fathima...

Thanx dear
Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Guys! Sorry couldn't update yesterday but am going to today.

Part 37:

 

Nivi and Viren twirled their hands as they each held on to one side of the pram and walked inside Disney land Paris. It looked just like they had shown on all the tv's. As much as she was scared of all the crowds of people around her, she was enjoying it too. The children looked around too and their dad hadn't stopped making life better for them as at the moment Viren was tying some balloons to their cart which had many different shapes and sizes too. They loved it and laughed too in delight.

 

They visited Mickey's house and what a delight it was. Nivi tried on the ears and she looked so beautiful Viren couldn't help taking a picture of her. They bought many good looking souvenirs and besides it was so beautiful too. They kept looking around the places. Each place had a section where they could pose for their best picture and yes they looked great too that every time the photographer complimented their Jodi and beauty. Nivi shied and blushed each time and Viren would touch her cheek and say that what he was saying was very true.

 

As it got darker, they waited along a park for a character parade and they were very excited too. Viren touched Nivi's hand and gripped it firm as the parade started. Each cart was filled with a different Disney character and it looked wonderful with the lights and decorations as each one looked different from the other. They waved as they passed and gave flying kisses too to the crowd as in the distance a lady dressed as a fairy stood at the peek of the Disneyland castle and sang a song. As far as Nivi was concerned the day was over and they were returning home but Viren definitely had other things in mind.

 

When they were dropped at park, Viren slowly guided her to a place with a blanket, strawberries, sparkling drinks, and a rose. He read a poem that he had written for her and she felt tears in her eyes as he continued on.

"Tumhe dekhtha hoon toon mera saasein rukh jaathi hain, tumhare har baat mujhe pasand aathi hai, tumhari muskarat hi mera dil ki khi hai, jab tum hasthi ho tho mera dil pukaartha hai hi mein tumhare bina kuch bhi nahi, aur jab mere paas thum nahi hoti toh mere dil koh bohot dard hota hai, wada karo khi tum har pal, har zindagi mein saath rahogi, mere paas, mere saath".


He brushed her tears and embraced her as rain drops began to fall. Viren slowly closed the pram and ensured the children didn't get wet before he put out his hand and asked "do you dance with me?" her heart yearned for him and so she accepted his offer as she stood up and embraced him further. They slowly moved and danced as the wind whistled as their music.

Viren gripped firmly to her waist and twilred her once in a while and she blushed. He needed to get more cozy and that was really what he was doing. Kissing her neck and making her breathing just as rapid. she was thanking the fact that no one was around her as he kissed her further and plunged her in the world of love. Their lips met and they lost themselves in each other. 

Next up - return journey home

Hope you like it!

DO comment!

Edited by chandmeinchupi - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
superb, Simple yet very sweet update
Posted: 12 years ago
its really lovely my dear Fathima😛
the best thing about your update is poem...i really loved it to the core😃
 
hey dear
enjoy your vacations
 
thanx a lot for the lovely chapters
its really nice to know u
Posted: 12 years ago
Simple and beautiful Fathima..do write more such scenes after you are back from vacation
Posted: 12 years ago
Fathima it was excellent Dear,  So sweet and cute,   Do come back soon and continue with this, Going to miss ur scenes
Posted: 12 years ago

fathima its simple and nice..

Posted: 12 years ago
it is really nice...you are really a gifted writter... plz do continue...
Posted: 12 years ago
Love it and end was very romantic. Keep it up! 
Have A Nice Vacation!
Posted: 12 years ago
Fathima this was very lovely thanks swti...
Have a safe and happy journey:) we will miss you.
Come back soon:):):)

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