Baby Hua Thab Bhi Pyar Waisa! - part 37 updated - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: INGCIV

c'est tres jolie si seulement on vois en cette serie.


hi dear thanks for your comments! Yes I do understand french and so no probs if you post in that language.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Resh_kinhafan

Fathi dear...love ur romantic scenes very much...
Pls continue soon!!!


Thanks dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Nikita99

Love the dance on "soniyo". But why Divya's bday next isn't it should be naughty night together ðŸ˜‰. Any ways thanks again, Also thanks for the pm.



Ok I will add a naughty scene just for you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
its wonderful fathima...keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sushmitadutta

Woww Fatima just read ur latest 2 scenes ( 23 n 24) , mindblowingg yaar n 2 2 2 romantic . Scene 23 is sooo romantic , I always wanted Viren 2 get hurt n Nivi nursing him , kissing him on his wounds . lovedd it . Scene 24 is damnn romantic n sizzlingg , it gave me goosebumps . Simply amazingg . lovedd it . update soon .


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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Anisha_91

WOW Fathima...dunno what to say!!! That was totally awesome!! no words. It was absolutely amazing!!! Looking forward to the next scenes hurry up...sorry for being pushy lol but its just brilliant love it. x


thanks so much dear for your kind words
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome update!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sirjee

yy dat security guard cdame soo early..let nivren have dere romance completely...n let nivi had fulfilled her promise...hahahah



will fulfill promise dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: *Resham*

its wonderful fathima...keep it up


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Guys! I have some requests to fulfill today and well thank you to all those who are suggesting things they want me to write about. 


Part 25:

Nivi was lying on Viren's bare chest. It was night time and somehow once they returned home the storm had caught up again. Nivi slowly traced her finger up and down the planes on his chest. His breathing was steady and she was gripping round his waist. Her cheeks were red and would never stop blossoming until she fell asleep. Nivi thought back to what had happened when they entered the room. Viren wanted his bet to be fulfilled no matter what and Nivi couldn't disagree as he never took no for an answer. Viren never worried what time it is as for him every time is romance time and today she had to provide him with the double bonanza. She tugged on the shirt she was wearing and was pretty amazed at how she even had the courage to wear it. Viren had pushed her into the bathroom with one of his shirts saying that she was wearing just the top and nothing else. she nodded in agreement as she shied and went to change. After wearing she didn't even have the courage to look at herself in the mirror as she walked out. Before long she had felt Viren's embrace and closed her eyes. Soon she felt the pillows behind her head as he placed her on the bed.

Their breaths met and heartbeats got faster. Viren had enjoyed himself admiring her in this shirt. But for her it was one of her most embarrassing nights and she cuddled her face under the blanket whenever possible. Now was on her side brushing her hair after having kissed her so many time that it should be illegal. She blushed again at the thought of the lip kisses. He was not done yet as she felt him tickle her back and push her down as he looked into her brown eyes and smiled. He traced the buttons and Nivi shivered. He started to kiss her again and plunge her into eternal love.

Morning had finally arrived and Viren was taking his shower and Nivi was getting her hair dried when there was a knock on the door. She opened it to see Sid tip toeing in. She laughed at him and he said to be quiet. He had planned a surprise party in an hotel tonight as it was Divya's birthday today. Nivi had known that and she had bought Divya a present too. sid slowly explained how Divya is upset thinking that he does not remember and how everyone wished her and even called her but he wanted to be quiet till 4'0 clock. Viren came out to join in the conversation and it was now agreed that Nivren had to somehow make Divya agree and go out with them and they had to lead her to a dark hall where everyone will be waiting. Divya had been upset all morning. she had even recieved calls from her college friends but Sid had not even wished her or given her a card and that hurt her. Slowly one by one every family member left the home with excuses to reach to the hotel. Nivi and Viren somehow convinced Divya saying that she would be on her own with Dwita and it would be better to go with them. She agreed and left.

Nivi slowly led her to the hall carrying Varun and Nidhi. The lights flashes on and Divya noticed the decorations before everyone began to sing happy birthday to her. she was delighted to see Sid bring her a rose and a diamond necklace sat before she went on to mingle with everyone. Viren patted on Nivi's back before taking her to a corner and making her comfortable. CC asked if she could look after the children and Viren was pleased to see a change in CC's behavior after the arrival of the kids. He took the chance and led Nivi to the colleagues and they introduced each other. He was truly enjoying himself very much. Viren led Nivi to the dance floor but she refused to dance with him so he said fine and asked some of Divya's old college friends to share the floor with him. Nivi fumed on the side as they began to dance to a slow romantic number. she pretended like she didn't care about what Viren was doing and so talked to some family friends before making her way over to Dadi and Yash. But her eyes never stopped turning to look at Viren. 

Viren was enjoying making Nivi jealous again at it truly did bring out the best in her. So he started to move his hips to the beat at the same time keeping an eye on his wife's reaction. When the song tujhe bhula diya came to the radio, Nivi really did feel bad as she looked on at Viren dancing with Manisha who was her old classmate too. They were lost in each others eyes and she truly did not like it. She went up to Viren but he did not stop swaying and now she was very angry so she stepped on his foot. Viren's expression changed for a second or two before he continued dancing with her again. Viren was in agony her heels were pretty pointy and that didn't help him but he smiled just to let Nivi get a little more fuel. He continued smiling slyly at the girl before he excused himself for a while. 

Nivi had her own plan as she slowly asked the dj to play "desi girl" song and she began to sway on the dance floor as the crowd cleared and stood firm to watch her. She began to dance to the beat and Viren was watching his plan in action. The lilac sari she was wearing flowed around her and she did look like a beauty in his eyes. So when the male lyrics crept up he began to dance as well with her. He walked around her singing and she smiled too so he assumed he was forgiven. Everyone clapped and cheered on and Sid and Divya were excited seeing Nivi in this manner. Once the song ended Nivi shied and bowed down before moving to the side and pushing Divya and Sid to dance on a slow melody of "bekhuda tumhi ho". Nivi  pushed past the crowd and went back towards the children. She was still upset for what Viren had done. Viren wanted to be nice to her now and was carrying a drink for her too but she refused to accept anything. 

Viren slowly pulled on his ears and apologized but she refused to listen to him. He slowly confessed that whatever he had done was for her and he could never do it again and Nivi finally let out a small smile saying it was her fault and she should have danced with him in the first place. soon the cake was cut and they fed each other. It was a perfect in the end and everyone had thoroughly enjoyed it.

Next up - Nivi bets Viren!!!
Hope you like it!
Do wish me luck for my exams today!
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