Me & You.. <3

Hello folks! Back with another poem, this time a short one, something that I just felt like penning down. Guess em not a good critic to judge over my own poems and I expect you all to do the job. 😆

Here's the poem. .
                                            
                                                  Me & You. . <3

Me & You! It's just so true,

After a trail so long.

If I could catch the star,

That made our dream come true. .

One in a million it is,

Chances of feeling the way we do.

May be we're in restraint, But

 We're raised to feel the bliss. .                                                                 

Living for the moments of  today,

We want this today to expand,

The time to come to a stop,

Forever, all these moments to stay. .

The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend. .

That's it. Complete. Hit the 'like' tab once if you feel its worth and/or comment. Criticism heartily welcomed. 😳

Chandana =]
Edited by -Ecstasy- - 12 years ago

Well...well now! What can I say! It was purely a mesmerizing read! Like reallly! :D It gave me a romantic feel! I shall use the text in my siggys sometime, if you don't have anything against that, of course! :P 

wow !!! so goood!!
love d words !
love dese lines sooo much !!!

The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend.


waiting for d next one !1
ty for d pm !!

This content was originally posted by: k_anjali12

Awesome One Chandana

👏

Thank you dear! 😊
Edited by -Ecstasy- - 12 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Angel-Pebby

Well...well now! What can I say! It was purely a mesmerizing read! Like reallly! :D It gave me a romantic feel! I shall use the text in my siggys sometime, if you don't have anything against that, of course! :P 

Well written, very well put! 

Keep posting! :-)

Thank you Garima! 🤗
You wanna use em, eh? Like, why would I have any problem? I still dun believe if the lines are worth a use.  😆

This content was originally posted by: niru273

wow !!! so goood!!
love d words !
love dese lines sooo much !!!

The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend.


waiting for d next one !1
ty for d pm !!

Thank you! 😳

amazing work chandana👏
i am speechless! you are just amazing😃
too good dear😳

p.s why dont you open your poem gallery😊

This content was originally posted by: vampire_girl

amazing work chandana👏
i am speechless! you are just amazing😃
too good dear😳

p.s why dont you open your poem gallery😊

Thank you Tasfia. . 😳
Um, I'll open it soon. 😊

GReat Job, Nice poem, Love it.