Posted: 12 years ago
Hello folks! Back with another poem, this time a short one, something that I just felt like penning down. Guess em not a good critic to judge over my own poems and I expect you all to do the job. 😆

Here's the poem. .
                                            

                                                 
Me & You. . <3


Me & You! It's just so true,

After a trail so long.

If I could catch the star,

That made our dream come true. .


One in a million it is,

Chances of feeling the way we do.

May be we're in restraint, But

 We're raised to feel the bliss. .                                                                 


Living for the moments of  today,

We want this today to expand,

The time to come to a stop,

Forever, all these moments to stay. .


The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend. .


That's it. Complete. Hit the 'like' tab once if you feel its worth and/or comment. Criticism heartily welcomed. 😳

Chandana =]
Edited by -Ecstasy- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Well...well now! What can I say! It was purely a mesmerizing read! Like reallly! :D It gave me a romantic feel! I shall use the text in my siggys sometime, if you don't have anything against that, of course! :P 

Well written, very well put! 
Keep posting! :-)


Posted: 12 years ago
wow !!! so goood!!
love d words !
love dese lines sooo much !!!


The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend.


waiting for d next one !1
ty for d pm !!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by k_anjali12


Awesome One Chandana

👏


Thank you dear! 😊
Edited by -Ecstasy- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Angel-Pebby


Well...well now! What can I say! It was purely a mesmerizing read! Like reallly! :D It gave me a romantic feel! I shall use the text in my siggys sometime, if you don't have anything against that, of course! :P 

Well written, very well put! 
Keep posting! :-)




Thank you Garima! 🤗
You wanna use em, eh? Like, why would I have any problem? I still dun believe if the lines are worth a use.  😆

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by niru273


wow !!! so goood!!
love d words !
love dese lines sooo much !!!


The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend.


waiting for d next one !1
ty for d pm !!


Thank you! 😳

Posted: 12 years ago
amazing work chandana👏
i am speechless! you are just amazing😃
too good dear😳

p.s why dont you open your poem gallery😊

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by vampire_girl


amazing work chandana👏
i am speechless! you are just amazing😃
too good dear😳

p.s why dont you open your poem gallery😊



Thank you Tasfia. . 😳
Um, I'll open it soon. 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
GReat Job, Nice poem, Love it.

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