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Me & You.. <3

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
Hello folks! Back with another poem, this time a short one, something that I just felt like penning down. Guess em not a good critic to judge over my own poems and I expect you all to do the job. LOL

Here's the poem. .
                                            

                                                 
Me & You. . <3


Me & You! It's just so true,

After a trail so long.

If I could catch the star,

That made our dream come true. .


One in a million it is,

Chances of feeling the way we do.

May be we're in restraint, But

 We're raised to feel the bliss. .                                                                 


Living for the moments of  today,

We want this today to expand,

The time to come to a stop,

Forever, all these moments to stay. .


The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend. .


That's it. Complete. Hit the 'like' tab once if you feel its worth and/or comment. Criticism heartily welcomed. Embarrassed

Chandana =]


Edited by -Ecstasy- - 18 May 2011 at 11:06pm

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Awesome One Chandana

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Well...well now! What can I say! It was purely a mesmerizing read! Like reallly! :D It gave me a romantic feel! I shall use the text in my siggys sometime, if you don't have anything against that, of course! :P 

Well written, very well put! 
Keep posting! :-)


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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
wow !!! so goood!!
love d words !
love dese lines sooo much !!!


The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend.


waiting for d next one !1
ty for d pm !!

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by k_anjali12

Awesome One Chandana

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Thank you dear! Smile


Edited by -Ecstasy- - 19 May 2011 at 3:43am
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Angel-Pebby

Well...well now! What can I say! It was purely a mesmerizing read! Like reallly! :D It gave me a romantic feel! I shall use the text in my siggys sometime, if you don't have anything against that, of course! :P 

Well written, very well put! 
Keep posting! :-)




Thank you Garima! Hug
You wanna use em, eh? Like, why would I have any problem? I still dun believe if the lines are worth a use.  LOL

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niru273

wow !!! so goood!!
love d words !
love dese lines sooo much !!!


The duet of ours would never end,

It'll tune into new notes.

I promise to feel this music always,

And I know you won't let it bend.


waiting for d next one !1
ty for d pm !!


Thank you! Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
amazing work chandanaClap
i am speechless! you are just amazingBig smile
too good dearEmbarrassed

p.s why dont you open your poem gallerySmile

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