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Rudranethra (ss) maaneet part 6 pg 40 updated (Page 16)

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Posted: 19 June 2011 at 11:42pm | IP Logged
very intrestng...pls update soon!!!

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jwalamukhi IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:14am | IP Logged

Part 3

geet stood looking at the car that disappeared in the rain. She was shocked with the events that happened to her. just then geet's father abhiram came outside from the terrace when he saw geet standing for long time outside...

"geet...yaha kada hoke tum kya soch rahi ho...chalo andher..."said abhiram when he came near geet. But she was in shock and she didn't notice her dad talking to her.When geet didnot respond...abhiram shook her bringing her back to senses..."kya hua geet..tum ithna kya soch rahe ho?"asked abhiram worriedly when he saw fear on his daughter's face...geet shook her head..saying"nothing dad"..gave a weak smile and ran to her room...

She locked the door and sat on the bed trying to calm herself...again her thoughts went on that stranger..."kaun tha woh...meri naam woh kaise jaantha hey...aur baarish ke baare mein unhe kaise patha chala"...she lied down and slowly closed her eyes trying to forget about that staranger..

when she closed her eyes..she saw herself in white clothes..and full of ornaments...with a crown...holding a sword...and then she saw the same stranger in the armour of knight standing before her...with the same intoxicating eyes looking at her...the stranger came near her...held her closely...and whispered in her ear..."agar mujhe maarna hey tho..ithna bhi math socho...talwar tumhare haath mein hey..mein tumhare saamne hu...jaldhi..ek hi bhar mein...kamzor math bano..."

She looked at him with tears in eyes...her hands were not at all co-operating...his looks were making her weak...her whole body shivered with his touch...her hands started to tremble...she looked at him and herself...she closed her eyes...screamed.."hara hara maha deva" and aimed the sword towards herself...

geet suddenly got up with a sudden jerk when she heard her father knocking the door...her whole body was sweating..her eyes were full of tears...she for a moment couldnot understand where was she actually...

"geet..geet..darwaza kholo...geet..."her father was shouting continuously...but geet was shocked..her body became numb...she couldnot differentiate whether it was her dream or imagination...she felt as if she was there before that stranger...she folded her hands and prayed not knowing what was happening to her...then she slowly got down from the bed and opened the door..."kya hua geet..kyu aaj azeeb sa behave kar rahe ho..."asked her father in a pain ful voice...

Geet gave a weak smile...and said.."kuch nahi dad..bas thoda thak gayi iam fine...abhiram looked at her in confusion and again asked.."are u sure beta"...geet smiled...and assured him with her eyes that she was alright ...abhiram sighed in relief...he turned to geet and asked her to get ready for her birthday party...

"birthday kya hey..aapko patha hey na..yeh sab mujhe achche nahi lagthe..aur aap mere birthday manane kabse shuru kiya..."yelled geet..feeling irritated with her father's decision...abhiram slowly came near geet..made her to sit and said..."mein jaantha hu...lekin yeh party bahuth jaroori hey...isliye bas iss baar mere baath suno aur tayyar ho jao..please..."...when her father pleaded her she couldnot deny..she nodded her head in approval..abhiram kissed her on forehead and left the room happily...

maan became furious with his mothers decision...he was worried about her safety...he kept calling her through out that day..but her phone was switched off...he threw the phone away and went to swim to cool his mind and anger...he started swimming...he just focussed his attention on swimming...and ignored all the things which were coming in his mind...when he went deep into the water...suddenly he felt someone pulling him into the deep waters...he couldnot understand what was happening to him..he tried to come up ..but his attempts were invain...he drowned...he reached deeper and deeper...his breathing became difficult...he felt as if he was dying at that moment...his energy started to decrease..the force he used to come up began to fade...slowly his hands and legs became numb...his eyes remained wide opened...and he was on his last breath...unknowingly he uttered..."hara hara mahadeva"...then suddenly he saw a hand moving near him...the hand...which was glowing like a sun...came upon on him and pulled him to the surface holding his hand...maan suddenly opened his eyes and found himself in the swimmimg pool safe and sound...he looked down...he could see the bottom of the pool unlike before...he shook his head and sighed...thinking that was his imagination...he came out of the pool ..dried himself and started to walk inside...during which he accidentally saw his wrist...on which he saw finger marks...glowing...

                                                                                               to be continued...

Edited by jwalamukhi - 26 June 2011 at 7:23am

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
super duper update...
the mystery seems to deepen...

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:32am | IP Logged

U r building curiousity ...con. soon

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..hinal.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
wowww loved it
the mystery is going more n more
maan imagining things but then saw finger marks on his wrist
n geet also imagining things

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
WOW!!! Awesome Updates..

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Intersting part 
loved it
pls cont 

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lalitha.. Goldie

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Posted: 26 June 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
nice part...thanks 4 pm...

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