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The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 (Page 98)

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M Luvin IT !! Parapppa !!!! HeartHug Puh-Lease PM me too !!!!!

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alright lady that was one awesome update!

Seriously i looked like a loser smiling the entire time to a computer screen surrounded by people!

there isn't one part of that that I could not have liked or just passed over. Fabulous- seriously may be one of my favorite updates.

It was genuine, honest, funny, passionate and just ...oh my sighs are getting longer with these updates...

Your writing seriously takes me into another world.

I like how we have the emergence of the trip back... i thought maybe you forgot about that!

Also- my greedy bit for this update- are we going to get a chance to see the emotions/interaction between A and S with the first alone moment since the craziness????? PLEASE!!

Thanks for writing us such great updates, can't wait for the 100th part!Heart

ps- love the  clock idea ;)




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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
juzz 1 word.. WOW!!!
Sharan is back too :D i missed him! hopefully wd d 2 couples busy v ll get to c more of him n Naina ;)

OMG 99...  r u feeling the nervous nineties shivers too? ohh boyy m soo much looking forward for the 100th 

Cant believe! 100th!!!!!! 

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wow!! Another update so soon!!

But now I WANT THE NEXT UPDATE!!!

my favorite parts of this chapter::
Everybody fell silent suddenly when their eyes drifted towards Simran, who stood behind Kanan with her head hung low, tears silently flowing down her cheeks. He walked towards her and held her face, making her look up to him. He kissed her forehead and hugged her tight, his own eyes moist now. There was something about this kid of his that made him forget everything else and just...just...just shower her with love. Needless to say, she cried even harder now...

It was time to part. As much as she wanted to stand there held in his arms, she had to leave. Aditya came around her and he gently gave her away to him, but not before kissing her again. She didn't have the courage to look at him, and thus, she walked out with Aditya with a blurred vision.



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Aditya stood in Rohan's way by the door to stop him from entering the room requesting him, "No mischief Ro." He looked over at Simran and Rohan followed his gaze. He then turned back, "Not tonight, please."



So now in addition to Ro, Adi and Sharan, we have one more person who is just so perfect --- Papa Khanna!!!! I loved how he felt so much for Simran!!

and what can i say about Adi ---- I want to know more of what goes on in his head... When i said in my last comment that the A-S SR is due , what I meant, is a conversation between A-S after such a momentous event in their life which just left Simran so stunned.. Would be so good to know what his thoughts are  and how he feels!!!

CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN QUICKLY!!!!LOL




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Please dont be upset :(

Its pure co-incidence (n i m lovin it ;) ) Honest!

Though i ll really like to c u dancing like your favorite party smily LOLZZ

Feels great 2 b backk just in time :D
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OMG... The last two updates were the best.. I was crying with Simran..

How do you write so nicely? Did u also cry writing that update??

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