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The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 (Page 91)

-BeingAppy- Senior Member

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 12:17am | IP Logged
Should i arrange for a Bodyguard to save me from deadly weapons and attacksOuch

Well if you remember, i am back (not with much of a bang though) and i missed soo much :(

Apart from Keerti i think i am going to be Kanan bhakt too.
She is such a sweetheart. I could connect well with her with the common factor of "what it feels like to have a younger sister" LOL However "evil" she might be (i louved the teasing part ;) ). Her care and love for her younger sister was so very adorable when she was finally convinced that Rohan will keep her lil' sis happy n safe. (Man, i can go on n on) 

And their father.. Hmm i find him similar to my papa in some ways too. (Save the mischief on the dining part, i dont know my father would have reacted LOL)

Back to Keerti, wow the way she consoled and understood Simran was fabulous, something which only a true friend can do. Though te tensison between Rohan n Keerti scared me a bit but, whoa, their Chemistry is fantabulous. And the song...Dancing

Naina again proved that she is a true head-strong fighter. I wish she comes out of this sadness soon and starts a new journey (with Sharan whatt sayy Wink) by the way where have you hidden him? Its not good to keep him all for yourself you know (me sulking) 

The pics!!!!!! Me dead! Whoa! Rohan...err i better shut up (bhavnao ko samjho)LOL
And the Girls were Wow!!!!!  Keerti looked Kool ,  Simran (mischievious) n Naina is smoky hawwt! 

Now m running off to save my lifeLOL

Take Care,
Appy :)

p.s. I got your msg frm Dee :) and ur suggestion was delightfully helpful, thank u-shank u hai jee ;) but still waking up in the mornings is toppling me :(

Edited by -Apeksha- - 12 September 2011 at 2:18am

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--dolphin-- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 9:03pm | IP Logged

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Cutiee_Ashh Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Hiii Dol :D Hope ur okayy? Sorryy ive not been commenting regularlyy its jus i dont get much time to actually comment as well as read the updates Unhappy
Back to the update,,it was wicked!!! i love the dad n daughter duo out to tease rookie TongueWink hehehehe,,nd i love how Rohan is understanding nd for keerti's sake will keep a (bit of) hold on the romance Wink
Pleasee dont end this sooon Unhappy,,im hooked on reading this thing,,dunw wat i'll do if it finishes UnhappyEmbarrassed
neway tc ndd dont stop writing because of the small number of comments pleaseee Smile
priya.. Senior Member

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 3:47am | IP Logged

Sorry about not commenting earlier!!!! lise s super busy- still tryinto to recover after the long weekend;-)

The pictures fantastic!!! Love rookie..naina is hot!!!!!

coming to the update..Ro has a hard time controlling himself when K looks so delectable!!! Did he just give her a hickey? My imagination is running wild...

Update super soon...i cant even imagine what's going to happen in Khandala if this is the preview...can't wait!!!!
bushrayou Goldie

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 7:38am | IP Logged
okay i am running to class BUT OMG  PLEASE do not even think something is worng!!
I will comment on the pictures and this part after class!!!
DOL you rock please dont be disheartened!
bhakbhartifan Senior Member

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Posts: 733

Posted: 13 September 2011 at 8:30am | IP Logged
I know I am lazy to comment, but please know that I really love your updates.. I always keep checking if you updated.

Loved the convo between Rohan and Heerti's dad.. LOL
Poor Rohan is in trouble as soon as he reaches the venue.
_Invincible_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 13 September 2011 at 8:31am | IP Logged
i was being my lazy self...but ur warnings scare me...i dont want u to ever end dis story so rushed to write a comment...Smile

Poor ROHAN...dese khanna's r taking a toll on him...poor thing is being teased and scared so much...lolz

p.s.   dis outfit is awesome and it was pretty obvious for rohan to go crazy...:P

bushrayou Goldie

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Posts: 1150

Posted: 13 September 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
okay firstly to your pictures!!

I think I had so gotten used to just imagining your different characters that I didn't know if I wanted to put specific faces to them...

But obviously with everything else that you excel at you excelled at this as well. they are perfect. Once i saw the pictures you can't picture someone else.

I feel like all the emotions and descriptions you put into your writing can be visualized with the faces of these characters now...

Might just have to re-read the FF with the faces in mind now ;)

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