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The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 (Page 78)

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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
lovely update... ...love the bond between simran and aditiya...eager to read more...

will edit after reading this new part tooo...
Edited:
Loved the latest update...da romance made me blush tooo...the trouble was indeed v sweet...last romantic moments before the trip...keep writing such gud parts :)

Edited by Imaan-Ki-Duaa - 30 August 2011 at 9:55am
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Posted: 16 August 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
oh why would you leave it there????? That was like having a bite of chocolate and not the whole thing!!! 

I want more of this last night!!!! Obviously there needs to be some dialogue? some romantic words? Some tender moments of heartfelt sorrow for her departure? 

You need to update!!! 

Love how you wrote this part: 
And then he gave her what she asked for. Trouble! Because he didn't let her sleep as he tasted all of the skin that remained uncovered around her top and shorts.  

You so smoothly let us know exactly what occured ... and I guess what didn't ;) 
Always stalking your FF! 

Update soon from this NIGHT!!! love it!! 

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 4:09am | IP Logged
nice! how  will i live with them a whole month apart? send ro to india soon..

i am in love with ro, the more i read about him:) and  oh i love him taking advantage and troubling Keerti:)
 
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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
just read updates from part 77...
feel so sorry for naina...sanjay is a psycho...he says he loves her...he hurts her and again come to the hospital to visit her...

rohan-keerti are turning naughty naughty...oh keerthi is going to india for 1 1/2 month...CryCryCry
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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Caught up with this FF two days back !

Awesome !

Loved the way u didnt include names of tv leads that left the readers in intrigue wondering who is who !

Brilliant !

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Posted: 17 August 2011 at 11:26am | IP Logged
one will surely love trouble wen its so amazing...Wink

poor rookie will find it hard to manage 1 and half month...dat will b uninvited trouble...lolz

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lovely update...was blushing reading ...
:)

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