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The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 (Page 65)

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Posted: 05 August 2011 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --dolphin--



Heyyy welcome back. SO good to see you :)

My Keerti bhakt (appy who always makes me happy :P) has currently disappeared. So I shall wait for her to reason out why Keerti doubted Rohan and his feelings.

As for Rohan...does anyone want to take a stab at being a Rohan bhakt to defend him?

And once again puth...so so so good to have you back :)

**Edit**

I am completely heart broken :(. No one else loves Rohan here *sob sob* and the Keerti bhakt is missing. So I'll do the honors...

Keerti didn't know of Rohan's feelings for sure. All Simran had said about his feelings were incidents she had noticed. There was no certainty that he loved her. So when she had decided to take the first step (despite being a shy girl) and saw him give most of his attention to another girl, she is bound to think otherwise. And then she saw Naina come out of Rohan's apartment all disoriented at 6 in the morning. What do you want her to make of it? I think her behavior is totally justified.

As for Rohan, we have seen how clear-headed, thoughtful and practical he is. She had always unknowingly given him the impression that she is affected by his touch (not in a good way though). And then he had thought she wanted to chop off his hands and lips...this was right after he had held her close and kissed her on her cheek on New Years. So how can he even think she loves him? After Simran and Naina told him the truth,  why would he turn a deaf ear after knowing Keerti loves him? He had been wanting her for so long...and who would give up on an opportunity like this when the woman you love walks right in your arms but had hurt you due to a misunderstanding? I don't think Rohan is that silly...

Does it make sense?



me too happy to be back DancingDancingDancingDancing
partly convinced...but still if i am in place of keerthi i would not go for 2 hrs run... just go to naina and ask what she is doing at this time of hr at rohan's place...there are  times when rohan stayed in keerthi's place also right like the night she was attacked...our cool boy never misunderstood her relation with Sharon...Anyways in this story Rohan is a sweetheartBlushingBlushingBlushing

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Posted: 06 August 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by --dolphin--

Originally posted by puth

hey dol...sorry for not posting any comments since long...just read the updates from 55-72 parts...Actually i only saw 3 pm's earlier from you and later they stopped so i thought may be the FF is on hold or something...today when i get a chance to read those 3 updates i came here and found that you progressed up to 72 parts...then i went back and checked my emails to see that you asked us to confirm for pm...and that is how i missed all the pm's...

Loved the updates...u tortured poor rohan like anything...i am not happy he came back to keerthi as soon as he found keerthi loves him...even keerthi knows rohan loves her and still she doubted him and my poor rohan listening to simran and naina he came to keerthi immediately...i feel bad for my rohan

tempting queen...whenever there is a romantic scene between simran and adi you don't mention their names in the beginning and i keep imagining is this a dream sequence between keerthi and rohan

last but not the least loved naina and sharon as well...

EDIT:
Oh i just saw that part 73 is also up...sanjay is a BAS****


Heyyy welcome back. SO good to see you :)

My Keerti bhakt (appy who always makes me happy :P) I am honoured"> 
has currently disappeared. So I shall wait for her to reason out why Keerti doubted Rohan and his feelings. opss sorry…I got late ">


As for Rohan...does anyone want to take a stab at being a Rohan bhakt to defend him?

And once again puth...so so so good to have you back :)

**Edit**

I am completely heart broken :(. No one else loves Rohan here *sob sob* Main Hoon Naaa... Blushing

Keerti didn't know of Rohan's feelings for sure. All Simran had said about his feelings were incidents she had noticed. There was no certainty that he loved her. So when she had decided to take the first step (despite being a shy girl) and saw him give most of his attention to another girl, she is bound to think otherwise. And then she saw Naina come out of Rohan's apartment all disoriented at 6 in the morning. What do you want her to make of it? I think her behavior is totally justified. ">


As for Rohan, we have seen how clear-headed, thoughtful and practical he is. She had always unknowingly given him the impression that she is affected by his touch (not in a good way though)LOL. And then he had thought she wanted to chop off his hands and lips...this was right after he had held her close and kissed her on her cheek on New Years. poor him i was trying to visualise him all scared and sweating ROFL So how can he even think she loves him? After Simran and Naina told him the truth,  why would he turn a deaf ear after knowing Keerti loves him? He had been wanting her for so long...and who would give up on an opportunity like this when the woman you love walks right in your arms but had hurt you due to a misunderstanding? I don't think Rohan is that silly... yea just a "little crazy"Wink

Does it make sense?

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Posted: 06 August 2011 at 5:36am | IP Logged

Ok before you get ready with your collection of weapons I have a reason (a Very Strong one)to go missing. 

Well errmm I was kind of learning to skate and right now am a proud bearer of a blue/black and somewhat red nose...yea right Laugh as much you can...huh

Anyways after you are done laughing(grrr) do tell how are You feeling now? Hal-chal thik thak?

I missed  3 Updates!!!!!! Omg

Part-71 No commentsBlushing

Part-72

"When their appetite was temporarily satiated for that moment," seems like they have taken the FEVICOL advertisement too seriously...jab dekho tab...D'oh

"making sure to use the towel for the exact reason it was made." Yea right! They needed the reminderLOL

Part-73

Keerti again was amazing. The way she explained Naina's feelings and sufferings and her own thoughts with simple and stark clear words was wow,also Rohan's concern for Naina showed how strong their bond has grown, even after knowing he was the one who broke her heart. I simply adore their friendship.

Sanjay...another bitter reality. No blames to the heart-broken Naina for she was just seeking a soothing company which unfortunately turned out to be a persistant bug with a rejected proposal of course a big blow to the Huuge male ego.

Now...now am expecting a full action-packed drama...wow. 

Waise you have casted Milind Soman as Sharan  what about Rohan and Keerti and others?

Well i think i am out of danger now...pheww
Appy (hope you will be happy Wink)
Take care
Cyaaa



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Posted: 06 August 2011 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Hey Dolphin...

Well first I'm very happy that finally KiRo made up and have confessed their love...

Very lovely updates dear... and thanks for the PM
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Well the curiosity was due from a long time back 

But you are the writer...come-on yaar I/We imagine and visualize the story from your point of view. Whenever you mention Sharan the image of Milind Soman automatically pops up, feels like watching a live drama...Day Dreaming

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